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THiS iS THE STORY
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ACCOUNT IT WAS MOVED HERE. THANK YOU READERS
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  1. storytimelovesx53 storytimelovesx53
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    August 26, 2010 5:23pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 12. - mom, you have some explaining to do -
    my dad, i mean Mr. Dillens, didn't want to speak about it when i woke up in the hospital. he said later. we were in the car, again he said later. till finally it was about five in the afternoon. i was sitting in my room reading a book on my bed. when the lights went out. "hmm, probably that huge AHH!" i fell off my bed and was breathing heavily, lighting scares me alot. KNOCK KNOCK! "come in." my heart was still pounding from the scare of the massive lighting bolt. When the person came in, it was my dad. He had a stern look on his face.
    "well, i guess it is time to talk about this well scandal. but first whatever happened at the reading of the will. will stay among the Dillens family. Also, whatever we talk about in this room will not go into public." my dad said. even though he had a stern look his eyes showed his true feelings. his dark crimson colored eyes showed, he was scared, and didn't know what to do. I nodded my head to his somewhat question.
    "About 17 years ago, at about October your mom and I ... had a short separation. Before you say anything. we only did it because we started to bicker a lot about the smallest things. which would start into huge arguments. Then it would become not talking to each other for weeks. so we separated for a couple weeks for the family sake. And everything was great when we came back. However, your mom she was seeing someone durning a couple weeks. and... well his name was Paul Jeffery, as you know. . ."
    i gasped, i heard that name before. it was really familiar. we were invited to his elegant dinner parties before. I shook hands with him. I had small talk with him. "THE MAYOR! THE MR. JEFFERY! how come no one ever mentioned it. or even my - i guess biological father -. its been what 16 years!"
    i said with anger. i was being to harsh to my father. he didn't do it . my mother did and all this time i thought my mother was the perfect wife, psha.
    " Listen listen, Jenna Bear. it's okay you know how your mother hates embarrassment because she thought it ruined her social life. well she actually made him sign a contract that we will not tell you till your 16. we were about to till the ... well anyway he pays child support, barley but it doesn't matter. we have enough money to support you in collage fees and your other brothers and sisters !" he half laughed instad of a happy laugh it sounded more depressed. i didn't think it was funny.
    "well i guess i'll go. if you have any questions call him. keep this number. i think you'll need it soon. Jenna Bear, i love you, remember that no matter what happens you always have your family and friends. bye."
    He left before i asked him what that meant, but i still ran out to the door and screamed " i love you too dad, i don't care if your not my real by blood father ! " I actually felt happy for the first time since it all started.
    but i should of known that happiness doesn't last for long...
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  2. storytimelovesx53 storytimelovesx53
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    August 26, 2010 5:23pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 11. - Surprise ? -
    today, was the reading of my mother's will. it was cloudy out. the weatherman said there was a 90% chance of rain. it was the perfect weather to what i was feeling inside. My father and i were the first ones to get there. then slowly one by one of the close family members and my siblings' cars showed up in the parking lot. we entered the room , it reeked of oldness. there were 15 seats inside. i sat in the front row. this is weird even scary. i knew i'll be in here for my mom but not at 16 maybe atleast 50 or something.
    the door opened , finally uncle pat is here! Finally we can get this over with.
    "First on the will , will be for the children that Mrs. Dillens and Mr. Dillens. Mrs. dillens gives each of the following children ; Lillen Dillens, Michael Dillens, Zach Dillens, Julia Dillens, Christopher Dillens receives 50 thousand dollars each and other items. " wait what ? i countiued to listen to see if my name was mentioned later.
    "Now for Mrs. Dillens and Mr. Paul Jeffery's child; Jenna Dillens, she also receives 50 thousand dollars, plus other items." He finished.
    i stood straight up and yelled on the top of my lungs.
    "WAIT, WHAT ! WHAT DO YOU MEAN AND MR. PAUL JEFFERY'S CHILD! WHO IS PAUL! WHY IS HE MY FATHER !" i felt dizzy, the room was spinning around i couldn't stand straight so i grabbed my chair to not faint. the room was cutting into a short small box. it just kept fainting away. the last thing i remember was my not biological father's voice. "Sweetheart , mother always wanted to tell you the truth."
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  3. storytimelovesx53 storytimelovesx53
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    August 26, 2010 5:23pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 10. - i spy with my little eye . a + -
    two weeks passed by, things changed. my brothers and sisters actually stay home for more than 4 hours. as a family, we're actually connecting , speaking more than "pass the mashed potatoes." or "what time is it?" . But then there is dad. I never really seen him show his true feelings. he has a monotone voice and hates it when hes embrassed among his friends and other rich guys at the rich people party. Basically , he cared about his imagine. but since mom died. he went into this deep depression. he walks around unshaven and in his pajamas. they are starting to stink. sure im really truly sad. i have random outbursts of tears every hour. i always think of cutting, but even i am to chicken for that. me and dad are the ones who are having the hardest times with mom's death.
    then there is the butterflies. i feel them sometimes in my stomach. i know im pregnant. my period was suppose to start about four days ago. so i finally cleaned myself up and went to CVS to buy a pregency test. i waited a couple minutes plus a couple more to actually look at it. yup , positive. great, now that's the icing on the cake! my dad will get into an even deeper depression! now what ? i looked into mirror. pulled my shirt up to only see my stomach. i thought i saw the smallest baby bump. when my oldest sister got pregnant at 18 , my parents freaked so much they sent her to a nun school somewhere in Europe. but im only 16. who knows what dad will do. i just can't tell him... i cant start even more drama. i sighed and looked in my closet. i pulled out all the loose big shirts i have. ill have to hide the bump somehow. great i only have 10 . that's not gonna last me even a month. i took out my credit card and called natasha to pick me up we have to hit the maternity store.
    now i just hope no one finds out.
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  4. storytimelovesx53 storytimelovesx53
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    August 26, 2010 5:22pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part . - ding dong, its death -
    when i finally made it outside. i saw my mother , pale white. blood everywhere coming from one main point. the heart. i was in total shock. i just stood there, i never noticed the sirens in the background. my father in tears and on his knees screaming why why why ?!? i only focused ahead where i saw the shadow of a teenage boy who shot my mother, who broke my heart , who ruined everything in my perfect life. mike dumprey. it was obvious that i pretty much put this horrible fate on my mother. If only i was the one outside not her. maybe then i would be the right one to go. then out of no where i started to sob turning into wailing. then into screaming "THIS ISN'T FAIR! I SHOULD OF BEEN THE ONE! I SHOULD OF BEEN THE ONE!" i started to kick things ; chairs , flower pots, and i was about to kick my father unknowingly. till he just gave me a hug , so did Natasha. Then i saw multiply cars pull in . suddenly i was in the middle of a 7 people hug. we went to the hospital, it was no use of putting her there since she was already dead the time i ran outside.
    i know this is super short & kinda uninteresting part,
    but im on vacation ill write more in two days
    thank youu readers :)
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  5. storytimelovesx53 storytimelovesx53
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    August 26, 2010 5:17pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 8. - -
    i screamed , "CALM DOWN! " a huge wave of relief passed through me. it only was Natasha. She was still wearing the outfit we bought earlier. she had her heels in her hand. She was all sweaty. She actually ran here. I wonder if she bumped into mike. hopefully not. "w-what are you doing here ?" i stuttered. "I should be asking the questions here." she sounded annoyed. "like why were you climbing out of a window , or why are you blooding, why was mike cursing at you ?" her voice started to lower by every question, like she was about to tear up. wasn't i suppose to cry here. my life is ruined not hers. "Nat , why are you crying !" i shouted , i didnt mean to yell but i was annoyed by her all ready. "Because my best friend doesn't trust me enough to tell me what happened or pretty much any other secret."she slowly said. the words burned because they were true. "you want to know what happened then lets come inside. who knows what kinda people creep in the dark." I said the last sentence quietly. When i tried to open the door to the house. i noticed my hands were shaking badly so Natasha had to open the door.
    We walked to the grand bathroom. i only picked it because one: i had to clean up this blood. two: there aren't any windows , so mike wouldn't be able to see the light in the house. three: the door locked but if mike did break through the house then he'll have to search the whole house which would give enough time to hide. " It all started at 7:00..." right when i finished telling Nat the whole story and answering her many questions. we heard a bang. . . then a blood curling scream.
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  6. storytimelovesx53 storytimelovesx53
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    August 26, 2010 5:17pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 7. - better watch out -
    i ran as fast as my legs could take me. thank god i took track last year. i ran to my backyard and into the woods. no one outside the family knew there was an emergency house back there. it was underground the only way to acess it was a key. so i pulled out my key ring . it was hard to open . then i heard a distant voice coming from the front "JENNA , OPEN THIS DOOR ! uhh SOMEONE HURT YOU I WANNA TAKE YOU TO THE HOSPITAL! JENNA ! " oh no it was mike. i cant believe how the perfect boyfriend became this monster. i started to cry but i wipped them away. there was no time to cry. i quickly grabbed a near by rock and bang it against the key. FINALLY. i ran it and shut the door behind. i'll be safe here no worries. snap. what was that ?! probably an animal stepping on a twig. snap. there it was again. "Jenna, girl come out come out where ever you are." I knew i was safe down here but i still hid in the corner of the safe underground house just incase. "that little b●tch." he spat out coldly. shivers ran down my back. how could he talk like that , just a couple days ago he was calling me beautiful. i heard a ring . "yeah , no, i don't know where she is. yeah yeah , shes to chicken to tell , pshh no one would believe her. im known as he best boy around here. Kay be there in a few." i heard him walk away. i waited another half an hour to get out. the whole time i walked home i was nervously looking around to see if mike was anywhere. right when i was about to open the door. someone grabbed me by the shoulders.
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    sorry kinda short. i dont have enough time.
    ill write more dont worry
    thank you for people that actually take time and read my stories.

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    August 26, 2010 5:17pm UTC
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    August 26, 2010 5:16pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 4. - things happen -
    Ding Dong. rang the expensive doorbell Mrs. Dillens imported from Paris , France. Jenna's mom always bought expensive items, but once she bought them they never really would be used. The only thing that is actually used a lot is the doorbell . Ding Dong. "coming , coming." I shouted. while she was running to the door she checked her phone. Odd its seven . what took him so long. when she opened the door she was in shock . . .
    it was mike but this was bloody mike , who wore a red stained white beater and ripped shorts. He had bloody gashes all over his face and arms. "W-WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU ?!? I'LL GO CALL 911." right when i was about to press the last digit , mike took the phone from my hands harshly. "mike i need to call 911 , look at you! " i said , i heard fear in my voice. "No, its okay a guy jumped me while i was walking out of the car. but trust me i did worse to him. Uhh can i stay over your house , i'm feeling a little sore." he said with a normal voice like this happens all the time. "wait uhh sure. yeah let's get you cleaned up." confused i started walking to the kitchen. it didn't really matter if mike stayed over. the Dillen parents were off on other vacation without the kids. While jenna's other silbings were off at the party who knows when they will get home. "Jenna, i think i'll just go upstairs in your room to lay down , kay ?" he asked with a low voice. "sure, sure i'll just finish cleaning this up." When mike left i was almost ready till the paper towel that cleaned up the blood fell on the ground. "woah." i said quiety. this kinda smells like ketchup. nah it cant be , its probably just in my head , besides i didnt eat dinner. i must just be hungry but still...
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    August 26, 2010 5:15pm UTC
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    August 26, 2010 5:12pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 2. - the get to know -
    JUNE 16th.
    Before this date , Jenna Dillens was the girl every girl wish she was. Jenna Dillens was the girl every guy wanted to date.
    but , only one got to. Mike Dumprey. who would of known
    he would be the one. No i am not talking about love ... well. but i am getting ahead of myself. Jenna she was a chestnut , blue eyed beauty. who's parents were filthy rich. to some up , she was smart , played every sport, beautiful, and popular. Pretty much everything a girl wanted to be right ? however , this is gone in an instance by one stupid boyfriend. then problems just keep popping up. one by one they destory jenna's life.
    & this is where our story begins.
    Part three is where the official story starts sorry

  12. storytimelovesx53 storytimelovesx53
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    August 26, 2010 5:10pm UTC
    All down hill from here.
    part 1. - the intro -
    You know that feeling when its the first day of school ,
    and you have all that confidence because maybe you
    came back with the cutest outfit or you have the most amazing
    boyfriend & you just want to show him off ?
    yeah , well Jenna Dillens didn't have that feeling on her
    first day on 11th. To explain , what Jenna did feel. we'll have to
    go back to the last day of 10th grade. June 16th.
    The day Jenna's life went to ruins.
    this story is here now. sorry
    for confusion. :/
    Does it sound interesting. i wrote three parts so Far .
    comment or fave. tell me how it sounds.
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