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All down hill from here.
part 11. - Surprise ? -



today, was the reading of my mother's will. it was cloudy out. the weatherman said there was a 90% chance of rain. it was the perfect weather to what i was feeling inside. My father and i were the first ones to get there. then slowly one by one of the close family members and my siblings' cars showed up in the parking lot. we entered the room , it reeked of oldness. there were 15 seats inside. i sat in the front row. this is weird even scary. i knew i'll be in here for my mom but not at 16 maybe atleast 50 or something.
the door opened , finally uncle pat is here! Finally we can get this over with.

"First on the will , will be for the children that Mrs. Dillens and Mr. Dillens. Mrs. dillens gives each of the following children ; Lillen Dillens, Michael Dillens, Zach Dillens, Julia Dillens, Christopher Dillens receives 50 thousand dollars each and other items. " wait what ? i countiued to listen to see if my name was mentioned later.
"Now for Mrs. Dillens and Mr. Paul Jeffery's child; Jenna Dillens, she also receives 50 thousand dollars, plus other items." He finished.
i stood straight up and yelled on the top of my lungs.

"WAIT, WHAT ! WHAT DO YOU MEAN AND MR. PAUL JEFFERY'S CHILD! WHO IS PAUL! WHY IS HE MY FATHER !" i felt dizzy, the room was spinning around i couldn't stand straight so i grabbed my chair to not faint. the room was cutting into a short small box. it just kept fainting away. the last thing i remember was my not biological father's voice. "Sweetheart , mother always wanted to tell you the truth."

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