picklove
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1 decade ago
good idea! thank youu!:) reply
3pointballer
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1 decade ago
i think that the second chapter 3 makes more sense...because in the first one it says that he was announced dead by the paramedics....but then he just walked into her resteraunt. so the 2nd one makes more sense connecting it to the present. hope this helped! reply
picklove
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1 decade ago
awhh thank youu!!:) do u like this chapter 3 or the other one i wrote to and i cant decide which one i like better reply
BrieLynn · 1 decade ago
Britney? ;D
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oxoliviaxo · 1 decade ago
ME ME ME ME PICK ME
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Carliebearr · 1 decade ago
agreed!!!!
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xosoftballchica12 · 1 decade ago
pleasee keep writing dream of mine though!!! i love it
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jemmybear · 1 decade ago
WRITE MORE PLEASE
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dont · 1 decade ago
lovelovelove
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Marigail · 1 decade ago
Heyy! New reader! I think your story is awesome! (:
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madlove16 · 1 decade ago
i like itttt
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rosethorn22 · 1 decade ago
sarh brown straight hair with hazel eyes
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madlove16 · 1 decade ago
maddie!
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picklove · 1 decade ago
good idea! thank youu!:)
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3pointballer · 1 decade ago
i think that the second chapter 3 makes more sense...because in the first one it says that he was announced dead by the paramedics....but then he just walked into her resteraunt. so the 2nd one makes more sense connecting it to the present. hope this helped!
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picklove · 1 decade ago
awhh thank youu!!:) do u like this chapter 3 or the other one i wrote to and i cant decide which one i like better
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happyfry66 · 1 decade ago
thiss is good:D
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picklove · 1 decade ago
in the process of writting it now:)
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kellymahomie136 · 1 decade ago
third chapter?
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