kelimc9
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1 decade ago
thanks guys :) @Flying Dove ... its completely fictional. I was in the car one day and it just.. came to me. I started writing and the words just kept pouring out of me. I'll post some more of my poems if you think they're that good lol :)
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AvrilX1
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1 decade ago
WOW, this is amazing! You are REALLY talented! Write some more! :) reply
HeReToHeLp101
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1 decade ago
did this really happen? Or did you just come up with that? that's REALLY good! reply
FlyingDove
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1 decade ago
Whoa..... You are really talented! I absolutely love this! You have great word choice, and the ideas you portray are amazing? Is this based on something that happened to you, or is it completely fictionalized? Just curious. KEEP WRITING! reply
MiseryLovesMeee
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1 decade ago
This is great, love. But if you want real feedback, may I suggest:
booksie.com
inkpop.com
quizilla.com
That's all. :) reply
kelimc9 · 1 decade ago
thanks guys :) @Flying Dove ... its completely fictional. I was in the car one day and it just.. came to me. I started writing and the words just kept pouring out of me. I'll post some more of my poems if you think they're that good lol :)
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AvrilX1 · 1 decade ago
WOW, this is amazing! You are REALLY talented! Write some more! :)
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HeReToHeLp101 · 1 decade ago
did this really happen? Or did you just come up with that? that's REALLY good!
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FlyingDove · 1 decade ago
Whoa..... You are really talented! I absolutely love this! You have great word choice, and the ideas you portray are amazing? Is this based on something that happened to you, or is it completely fictionalized? Just curious. KEEP WRITING!
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MiseryLovesMeee · 1 decade ago
This is great, love. But if you want real feedback, may I suggest:
booksie.com
inkpop.com
quizilla.com
That's all. :)
reply