hiddengirl1995 · 1 decade ago
I meant to say I really liked it
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hiddengirl1995 · 1 decade ago
I reslly
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dapz95 · 1 decade ago
well this story is really heating up :0 :0 ah god that was terrible. sorry.
but really like the way this is going. maybe show a bit more of brooklyn's life - her friends, their opinions of vinny - stuff like that
what obstacles their might be in the way of their relationship? apart from brooklyns dissapating hatred?
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
Please update soon! I really like this story.
And I have a tip also, try keeping the parts that overlap between perspectives less repetitive. That will make the story more exciting.
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
I love this so much!
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
I really really loved the end of this story
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SunnyAegyo · 1 decade ago
Oh my goad that was awesome!!!! i cant wait to see what happens next, write the next chapter plz!!!
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isabeltheosm · 1 decade ago
do you notify?
and i love your story :)
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
perfect <3 keep writing and update soon please!
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tigersforever · 1 decade ago
a title suggestion could be, public enemy number one, or something like that by the way I love your story its really good so far
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JimmyIsWeird · 1 decade ago
Lol thanks for the shout-out. I'm like, "wait is that my name??"
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
this is cure <3
it reminds me of earlier this year we did an immigration reenactment and I somehow got married to my ex boyfriend in the process. >.< it was terrible omg and what were the chances?
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JimmyIsWeird · 1 decade ago
Great story and all but could I give you a few helpful hints?
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ArtLover · 1 decade ago
omg i love this story <3
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
so good and i agree with her... wait a second.... why is there no down arrow? god i hate people. I agree with dapz95
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dapz95 · 1 decade ago
very nice girlie!
you wanna know why this story seems to be a lot nicer than some of the others? it's got a lot of substance going on. you know - the story lines a bit bigger and complicated than i-hate-you-i-love-you-lets-kiss-lets-not. Maybe you could expand on that more weaving the romance into different areas ... you know, focusing on family, then freinds ... the romance can develop through other experiences
know what I mean?
thank you for the notifications - keep sending!
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Brainy_Barbie · 1 decade ago
wow please tell me when the next chapter is out!!!
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JimmyIsWeird · 1 decade ago
notify list plz :)
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dapz95 · 1 decade ago
oh wow. NEVER heard a story take this kinda twist before!
i love the originality
Cannot WAIT to see what happens next - keep me on the notify list pleeaase!
and thank you for writing :) x
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Brainy_Barbie · 1 decade ago
this is sounding really good so far
get the next chapter out soon PLEASE!!!
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