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Too Tired to deal with layout stuff.

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August 21, 2011 6:54pm UTC

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July 23, 2011 11:00am UTC

S[he] be[lie]ve[d.]
Part 10
*Hayden's POV*
I sat on the edge of my bed. I'm pretty sure my hair was messed up from running my fingers threw it. "Just admit it, Hayden. She doesn't like you" I spoke to myself. I grabbed my phone and threw it, "She'll never like you."
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*Olivia's POV*
I was walking up my drive ready to walk inside when a voice called out for me, "Heyyy Oliviaaa." I turned around finding Drew at the end by the curb. I crossed my arms. "What do you want?" He made his way up. Slowly. He was standing about 8 feet in front of me. "I want you back, baby. I know you can't live with out me." He took a step closer. I got a big whiff of alcohol. "Drew, are you drunk?" He took another step closer. "Me? Drunk? No!" I looked at him up and down, certainly drunk. "Let me call your mom. She can come pick you up." Another step. "My mom? That won't be necessary. I want you Olivia." He took another step. "Comeee onnn. I know you want me. Bad." I looked from side to side. "Well..." He took another step. We were now face to face. "See, I told you." He puts his hands on my waist. I tried to wiggle away but he had a strong grip. That was when he put his arms around my waist and lifted me up over his shoulder. I tried to yell but his shoulder was digging into my lung. He took me to the surf shack that was unlocked. He threw me in and lock the door behind him as he made his way towards me.
Oooooooh... what's going to happen nextt?
Is Hayden going to give up on Olivia?
What's going to happen to Olivia?

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July 21, 2011 10:54pm UTC

S[he] be[lie]ve[d.]
Part 9
I didn't fall asleep that night. I was thinking about Drew. And especially Hayden. We kissed. That made me fall for him more. But I couldn't. It was too early. I'm not ready to "bounce" back like that.
I grabbed my phone of my nightstand and called Hayden. "Hayden? It's me. Olivia." You could tell he paused to smile. "Hey Liv. How are you?" I sighed, "I'm tired, heartbroken, confused." He paused, "I'm sorry. He's a douche. You deserve anyone but him." I kept quiet but I sadly agreed. I always felt like he was dragging our relationship. I tried to ignore it though. I loved him. Well, did. "Yeah. Well, I'm hungry. I think I'm going to walk down to McDonalds." He sighed, "Alright. Text me okay? I want to make sure your okay. I don't like seeing you hurt. It hurts me. I want you to be happy. Cause well, Olivia. You're the best thing that's happened to me." I smiled, "Thank you, Hayden. I will. Bye." I hung up. I grabbed my purse and made my way towards McDonalds.
I had a comment on how my layout was. So I changed it. It's still the same story though :)

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July 21, 2011 10:14pm UTC

S[he] Be[lie]ve[d]
Part 8
I ran as fast as I could. I couldn't believe what was happening. My head was spinning. My legs started to get weak and I collapsed. I sat and grabbed my knees to my chest. I just sat there and sobbed my pain away. We were dating for a year. Did I mean anything to him? Then more thoughts came into my head, How long was he cheating on me? When he didn't call me was he with someone else? I cried harder. I wiped my eyes and looked at my hands. My fingers were stained black. I felt someone walk up behind me, "Go away, Drew. We're OVER." I shouted. "Its..Hayden." I wiped my eyes and stood up, "I'm sorry. I'm just-" I broke into tears. I fell into Hayden's arms. I cried and he let me cry. He rubbed my back with his hands to calm me down. My sobbing went down and I looked up at him. "I'm sorry. I'm heartbroken. I would of never expected this to happen. We were, perfect." He looked down at me, "Everyone makes mistakes." I nodded. He continued, "And there is always time to fix them." We looked into each others eyes. Hayden brushed a tear away with his hand and he leaned in. Our lips touched. We stayed in the same position for awhile until I broke it for breath. I looked down, "I'm sorry. But I like you. A lot. But it's just too soon." He nodded, "No, it's my fault. I should of waited. Come on. It's late. I'll walk you home."

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July 21, 2011 9:38pm UTC

is anyone even reading my story?
the last couple parts to my story have gotten zero faves. And if no one is going to read it then why am I writing it? If i have no one to write for, I'm not going to write. It's as plain and simple as that. Its ridiculous. I want write but if I'm going to right for no reason then what's the point? Now watch this get zero faves too.
So if you can be nice. Please go to my profile, read my story, and fave it.
And if I should continue right a comment. It would mean so much to me. Really it would.
Thank you ♥

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July 21, 2011 3:48pm UTC

S[he] Be[lie]ve[d]
Part 6
Me and Kelsi ran up the stairs and into my room. Kelsi plopped on my bed as soon as she walked in. "Ahh, I LOVE your room! It's so..calm. With the hardwood floors, sky-blue walls, and that freaking balcony. I want your room." I smiled humbly at her. I couldn't really deny it. It was true. She sat up, "So what are we gonna wear? It's outside so we can't really wear anything too fancy." "We could wear like, cute tanks and shorts." She smiled, "Perfect!" I walked into my closet and grabbed a pair of short shorts, a cute white tank, and a grey cami to go underneath. I looked down at my shoes and found a perfect pair of biker boots. I picked them up and set my outfit down on a small chair by my door. Kelsi picked her outfit and we went into my bathroom and did our make-up and hair. About ten minutes before the party started we were done. "I guess we should go see if the boys are there." We walked down stairs and my mom was in the kitchen and my dad was sitting at the table reading the evening paper. "Hi Daddy." I kissed his cheek and hugged my mom. "Were going to a party. Don't worry we won't drink." My mom smiled, "Good girl." We walked out the back door and sure enough Hayden and Brody were standing down by a palm tree waiting for us. I stuck my phone in my pocket and walked down the steps with Kelsi following.

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June 29, 2011 11:12pm UTC

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June 29, 2011 8:06pm UTC

S[he] Be[lie]ve[d]
Part 3
I woke up to the sound of thunder. It's still raining? I thought. I looked at my clock 7:36. Better. Most nights lately I've been getting at most two hours of sleep. I got out of bed and walked into my bathroom. I took a shower and blew my hair dry. I straightened it and applied my makeup. My brown hair reached right under my shoulders and my tanish skin complimented my grey eyes. I didn't think I was pretty though. I never did. I sighed and walked into my closet. I grabbed a pair of American Eagle shorts and a Forever 21 tank top. I walked over to the floor where I dropped my phone. I picked it up and scanned it to see if it was fine. I opened it. 0 New Messages. I sighed and dialed Drew's number. It rang. And rang. And Rang. "Hey," Drew's voice said. "Drew! Thank God you answe-" "I'm not here right now. Leave me a message and I'll get back to you." I sighed and shut my phone. Walked across my room and opened the door. I walked into the hallway and saw everyone's doors were shut. I made my way to the stairs and walked into the kitchen. I grabbed a granola bar and walked onto the deck. The beach looked absolutly stunning. I looked from side to side but stop when I saw a guy. About my age. Tall, tan, blond hair, and had major abs play football with one of his friends. I sat there in awe. I grabbed my phone out of my pocket and texted Kelsi to get over here now. I crossed my arms and smiled. I couldn't wait for Kelsi to get over here.
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June 29, 2011 7:43pm UTC

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Part 2
The rain ticked onto my window as I lied in my bed. I stared at my ceiling fan and watched it go round and round. I turned to my clock 3:23 am. I couldn't sleep. My eyes were puffy from crying and my body ached. I reached onto my nightstand and grabbed my cell phone. I opened it up and called my best friend Kelsi. The phone rang three times then a slow, tired voice answered. "He-Hello?" "Kelsi! It's Livvie." "Why in the hell are you calling me at 3 o'clock in the morning?" I paused, "I-I can't sleep. It's Drew. I haven't talked to him in four days and I'm scared. What if he's cheating on me or something." She sighed, "Livvie. I know you're freaking out. But its fine. You and Drew have been dating for how long? Like a year? Its fine. Take a deep breathe and go to bed. I'll come over in the morning. Good night." "Night Kels." We both hung up. I closed my phone and threw it on my chair. I heard it fall off and hit the hardwood floor. To this point, I didn't care. I hugged my knees and cried some more. I slowly and painfully fell asleep.
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June 29, 2011 4:50pm UTC

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I checked my phone one last time. "0 New Messages". I haven't heard from Drew in 4 days. Something was up. I adjusted my postion in my chair in the corner of my room and looked out the window. It was raining. Hard. The rain ran down my window. I watched to see which one would hit the bottom first. Like I did when I was kid. I turned to my door as I heard it open. My mom walked in and smiled at me. "Liv, are you gonna come out of your room? You've been in there all day." I looked at my clock. 4:30. I looked back at her with a tear running down my cheek. I shook my head. My mom looked concerned. "Sweetheart, tell me whats wrong." I looked at her and smiled, "Nothing mom. I'm fine." She looked at me and accepted my answer but still was concerned. She walked over and pulled my brown hair behind my ear and kissed my forehead. "I love you Olivia." I looked at her. She turned and walked away. She waved goodbye as she shut the door. "I love you too Mommy." I whispered to myself.
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June 10, 2011 9:57pm UTC

Sound Track of my Summer
"Run faster Audrey! Faster!" My coach yelled yelled from the sideline. I was chasing West Views forward. She was two feet in front of me. I reached my foot under to grab the ball. Mistake. West View's other forward's cleat came on top of my knee. A shocking pain shot up my body. My knee killed. It hurt so bad I couldn't scream. I lied on the ground holding my knee and crying. My teammates and my coach came running towards me. "Audrey!" "Call 911!" All shouted around me. I slowly opened my eyes a crack. The girl who cleated me was standing with her team laughing. My best friend, Abby, saw them too. She got up and walked over there and started to yell, "You could of knocked her out for the season and you're laughing!? You could of permanently damaged her knee! I know if she did that to you she would be standing right next to you making sure you were okay. Great sportsmanship." When she was done she ran back over leaving the girls speechless. I heard the ambulance in the distance. I opened my mouth, "Abby. I love you. You're my best friend. Thanks for being there with me." I started crying. The men put me on the stretcher and carried me on the ambulance. I watched my whole team say goodbye in tears as the doors closed.
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