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February 15, 2013 9:00pm UTC

Lonely World Chapter 6 Part 2
Veronica POV:
When I opened the door leading into the girls bathroom T\the first thing i heard was the sound of her soft sobbing.
"Rachel"
She came out of the bathroom stall and she looked like a complete mess.
"What are you doing here?" She asked me.
I ignored that question "Are you okay?"
"Do I look okay to you?"
I didn't feel like arguing so I dropped it.
I wrapped my arms around her knowing that sometimes a hug from a friend is what people need when they are crying.
She hesitated at first but then returned the hug whispering "Thank you" then pulled away.
"I think you might need some new friends" I said.
"Yeah. no kidding. But I'm not sure Stephanie will allow that to happen."
"You're welcome to sit with me at lunch. If you want." I offered. I thought maybe she isn't as bad as a person as I thought and certainly not as bad as Stephanie.
She looked as if she was debating the awnser to that question.
"Well I guess it's better than sitting alone." Now thats the Rachel I knew.
I nodded "We better head to class before we get caught for ditchng.
"You go ahead I'm gonna clean up" She told me
I nodded once again and headed back to class.
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Lunch time rolled around and I met up with Rachel on the lunch line.
Of course everybody was staring at us wondering what Rachel was doing with a loser like me.
Guess they haven't found out about Stephanie's and Rachel's 'big fight' which is unusual because gossip in our school spreads like wildfire.
When we got to the lunch table Eric was already sitting down eating his lunch.
We sat across from him.
He raised on eyebrow at me as to say 'what is she doing here'
I gave him a glare to warn him that he better be nice.
"I hate to break it to you but you're at the wrong table."
So much for being nice.
"Veronica invited me here." She awnsered showing no emotion
"What not afraid your precious social status will go down."
This time it was her turn to give him a glare.
That conversation quickly came to an end and boy was I glad.
By the end of lunch you could say that me and Eric were warming up to her. She wasn't someone I would normally think to be friends with, this should end well.
Authors Note:
Ugh, more boring chapters. I'M TRYING HERE. LOL. I had to get through this part for it to actually start to get intresting but I think it's picking up. Feedback?

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February 11, 2013 6:08pm UTC

Alright so I started writing this story last year (a long time ago I know) I decided I wanted to continue it because now I have a better sense of where it is going http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5788577 <--- intro
The rest of the story is on my profile if you want to read it
Lonely World Chapter 6 Part 1
Veronica POV:
My mind was racing as i was about to walk into school.
Something about this day seemed off to me, not exactly sure why maybe it would be a good day for once. Probably not but hey a girl can dream.
I was snapped out of thought when I heard people screaming at each other.
“Who cares if I’m not dating him anymore” one of the voices said.
I peeked over the corner to find Stephanie and her ‘gang’.
The voice belonged to Rachel, the second most popular girl in school and Stephanie’s best friend.
“I do. If you’re not dating the star basketball player then you don’t deserve to be popular. I don’t even know why we allowed you into the group to begin with”
There goes Stephanie ruining people’s lives once again
“But I thought we were best friends” Rachel looked as if she was on the verge of crying, not that I would blame her. I mean, she just broke up with her boyfriend of a year and now is losing her so called
‘best friend’
“Yeah, well things change” Stephanie snapped at her.
I quickly hid in the bushes when I saw Rachel running my way, her face stained with tears.
Once she passed I looked back to see a satisfied look on Stephanie’s face. Man, I hate her.
I felt bad for Rachel
Not that I necessarily liked Rachel but I knew what it was like to get bullied by Stephanie.
So, I ran after Rachel into the girls room despite the fact that the bell had already rung.

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June 3, 2012 7:40pm UTC

Lonely World Chapter 5
Veronica’s POV:
*Two weeks later*
“So you want to come over to my house later”
Me and Eric have been talking for two weeks now and honestly he has become my best friend. “Yeah, sure. Homework?”
“Well we got that huge social studies test in two days.”
Ugh. “Don’t remind me. I’m pretty sure Mrs. Anders hates us”
Speaking of Social Studies, We both walk in the door just as the bell rings.
Mrs. Anders gives us a look as take our seats in the back.
I kinda zoned out during her lesson until I got a text message.
Eric: Soo boring
Me: I know I mean who cares about history
Eric: Dead people?
Me: Haha Good point
Ms. Evans and Mr. Grey are you texting. Crap.
“Phones now” We both reluctantly give our phones to her. “You both have detention after school and you can have these back after class”
I hear a chuckle out of Stephanie’s mouth. “Way to go loser” Whatever.
After class we both got our phones back and I texted my mom that I had to stay after for extra help so I wouldn’t be home.
No way was I telling her I got detention, she would just give me a lecture on how my siblings never got detention and how it better not happen again.
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After school went by and detention was finished me and Eric walked to his house. I didn’t realize how close he lived to the school.
I was prepared for a long walk because I don’t live all that close.
We opened the door and who I’m guessing is his little sister ran to the door, I think her name is molly.
“Hey Molly” Yup, Molly.
We walk up to his room and pull out our books to study. “Ugh, face it Eric I’m going to fail this test”
“Come on, you got to believe.” He said in a weird voice.
Then he started singing Don’t Stop Believing until his brother came in and told him to shut up.
I was laughing uncontrollably, something I haven’t done in a long time.
I guess with me not ever getting to see my best friend, my mom always comparing me to my brother and sister and always getting bullied I never was happy.
I just put on a fake smile for everyone to see.

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June 3, 2012 3:45pm UTC

Lonely World Chapter 4
Veronica’s POV:
Turns out we have lunch together. “Hey do you want to sit with me?”
I thought about it. What would his friends say when they saw him with the loser girl, it would be best if I just sit alone.
“Umm, I don’t really want to intrude on you and your friends”
“Ha. What Friends”
Since we were early to lunch there are a lot of open table. He leads me over to one and we sit there in silence.
I think about what he said ‘What friends’. I know he moved here at the beginning of the year but I never bothered talking to him because I thought he would end up being one of the ‘popular’ people.
“You have Mr. Dice too.” I shot my head up, how did he know that?
I must have looked confused because he pointed to my book, “The book How to Kill a Mockingbird, he’s making us read it”
Wow I’m stupid. “Yeah, it is not the worst book in the world, it’s a little boring”
“Not as boring as Mrs. Anders, I swear she puts me to sleep” I laugh at that, she can be really boring.
Lunch continued to go on like that, just us talking, “So Ronnie I guess I will see you around” “Yeah I guess so”.
Eric’s POV:
The school day couldn’t have gone slower. I live pretty close to the school so I just walk home.
When I get home I go into my room and log onto facebook.
234 friend’s, yeah right. These were all people from my old school, we always said we would keep in touch but after the first month I was gone so were they.
I sigh and thought about my day, that girl Ronnie seemed cool.
I never really noticed her before but I guess she was like me, constantly getting bullied for no reason. Oh well.
Veronica’s POV:
After the school is done I get on my bus and put in my headphones trying to block out the rest of the world.
I stare out the window just thinking about my day. Why did Eric want to be friends with me?
I look at my arm and there is a huge bruise there. I poke it with my finger and flinch in pain.
I can’t do this much longer. I’m sick and tired of being the ‘freak’.
Once I’m home I open up my laptop and see a friend request. I click on it…
Eric Grey

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June 3, 2012 12:31pm UTC

Lonely World Chapter 3
Veronica’s POV:
I wake up unwillingly to another miserable day.
Why can’t I have a normal life. My only friend doesn’t go to our school so I’m stuck alone in my school.
I get ready quickly and walk downstairs noticing that I have time to spare. I go into the kitchen and sit across from my brother while my mom places a plate of pancakes in front of me.
I look up and give her a weak smile.
“So Derek can you give me a ride to school today?” sometimes Derek drives me into school when he doesn’t have to pick up his friends.
I really didn’t feel like going on the bus today just to get teased.
“Sure, but I have to pick up two of the guys” I didn’t mind anything was better than going on the bus.
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The first couple of periods went by okay, probably because I didn’t bump into Stephanie.
I get my lunch out of my locker and I was about to walk to the cafeteria when guess who turns the corner.
I bury my head into my stupid English book hoping she doesn’t notice me.
“Hey look the freak is reading…again.”
“Why can’t you just give me a break for one day?”
“What and miss out on a chance to show everyone what a freak you really are”
I rolled my eyes. She yanks my books out of my arms and tosses them across the hallway then slams me against my locker and slams it shut on my arm.
I scream in pain as she walks off.
“Freak” I watch as her and her friends walk off and I could have sworn one of them gave me a sympathetic look.
Yeah right she was just upset Stephanie didn’t do worse. I was about to get up when I see a hand reach out in front of me.
I grab it and I’m pulled up. “Uh, T-Thanks”
I look up and see a guy there holding my books that Stephanie threw so I take them from him.
“You’re Veronica right?” Now that I get a better look at him I recognize him from some of my classes.
“Uh, yeah but you can call me Ronnie”
“Well, I’m Eric” he holds out his hand and I shake it.
“Yeah, I know you’re in my Social Studies class”
“Right.”

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June 1, 2012 9:13pm UTC

Lonely World Chapter 2
Eric’s POV:
“Mom I’m leaving” I yell as I walk out the door. I didn’t wait for her to respond I just wanted to get to school quicker in hopes that it would end quicker.
I moved to this small town at the beginning of the year with my mom, older brother and my little sister and hated it ever since.
I had to leave my friends behind and the place where I grew up. Let’s just say I’m not the most ‘popular kid in high school or whatever you want to call it. I didn’t care though I wouldn’t want to be friends with most of the kids here anyway, hence why I’m not.
As soon as I get into school I see Jake coming. “Sup loser” I roll my eyes and push past him.
“ Hey I was talking to you” Suddenly I’m yanked back.
“Listen I don’t know who you think you are but you better stay out of my way. You know what why don’t you go back to whatever planet you came from because nobody want you here. Got it”
I stay silent, I really didn’t care who he was or what he wanted I just didn’t want to be late.
I try walking away again when pushed into the locker and he knees me in the gut.
I drop to the ground in pain while I watch him walk away looking proud.
“Jerk.”
Author's Note:
Okay this was kind of just an introduction to Eric and how he comes into play. like i said it might be a little slow right now but it will pick up. I'm not really sure if anyone is reading this but oh well

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Lonely World Chapter 1
Veronica’s POV:
I walk into the classroom hoping to go unnoticed, but of course that plan fails.
“Ms. Evans is there a reason why you are late to my class” I look around the room where 23 heads stare at me like I’m some kind of alien.
“Uh, Umm, well my books k-kind of exploded everywhere” I say holding up my books.
“That’s no excuse next time you’re late you get detention.” Ugh can’t this woman just give me a break.
I take my seat in the back of my class trying to avoid the glares.
Class was boring as usual Mrs. Anders just doesn’t seem to stop talking.
The school day seems to go on just like that, god I wish I had some friends.
Not that everyone in my school dislikes me and thinks I’m a loser but no one has ever gotten the chance to get to know me.
After a long day of school I begin to walk home, I prefer to walk and not take the chance of getting made fun of on the bus.
As soon as I get home I walk straight up to my room avoiding my older brother and sister. It’s not that we don’t get along but we are total opposites, they have always been the ones everybody loves.
They aren’t stuck up like the popular kids but they have a lot of friends and well you get the point.
I slam the door shut and scream into my pillow. “I hate my life” I announce to no one. I blast my music and try to forget about the constant bullying I get during the day.
“I’m Home” I hear my mom shout from downstairs, I look at my clock, 6:00. I run downstairs to go greet her.
“Hey mom”
"Hi sweetie, do you know where your brother and sister are” I think back to what they told me about them going to a party. “Umm, I think their at their friends house”
“Well okay, do you want to invite a friend over?”
“No thanks” I say while looking down.
“Veronica why can’t you be more like your brother and sister.” Why can’t you just go hang out with people instead of hanging around the house.”
Yeah this is normal for me, my parents are always comparing me to them. I hate it, I’m nothing like them.
Although I wish I was. I would give anything to have a day in their shoes.
Authors Note:
Ugh sorry its going a little slow. The next chapter im pretty sure will introduce the second main character and i will write the story from both of their views. Well hope you liked it.

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May 31, 2012 10:16pm UTC

Lonely World Intro
Veronica POV:
I walk down the familiar hallway and think, why me?
My thoughts get interrupted when SLAM! I collide with a cold metal locker.
”Watch where you’re going loser” Stephanie gives me a sly smile as she walks away laughing with her friends.
Yeah that’s Stephanie her and her brother Jake, rule the school.
They always get what they want and everybody seems to worship them.
Except me, they are cruel to anybody who doesn’t have a popular status.
I have to admit though she is gorgeous with her long blonde hair and, her brother is pretty good looking too.
My thoughts are interrupted yet again by the sound of the bell ringing.
“Sh/t” I quickly bend down and pick up my scattered books and walk to class knowing there’s no point in rushing since I’m already late.
Authors Note:
Sorry this is really short but I just put it up so you guys would know that I decided on writing this story and sorry if it's not all that good. Hope you liked it...I guess. The other chapters will be longer.

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I'm thinking about writing a story and have three ideas. I don't know which one i like better or should write so you choose...
Lonely World
Two teenagers are known as the loners in their school. They wanted nothing more than to be popular. They thought their life would be so much better. So what happens when they build their way to the top of the school and discover how wrong they really were.
Who knew?
Think of your best friends, how well do you really know them? What would you do if you found out that one of them has a whole other life that you don't know about? This happens to a group of girls and they are left to find out who their best friend really is?
I'm Sorry
When a rich boy and a poor girl who have barely ever crossed paths "change places" they start to hate their life. They discover that each others families caused this change and start to hate each other. Eventually they get fed up with it and do the unexpected.
Sorry if it's confusing but I promise they will make sense once I start the story

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