Missing

Chapter 1
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"Alright everyone. It's you're last class and it's friday so we are just going to watch a movie and do a worksheet." Mr. P mumbled as he tossed the papers onto our desks.
"Hey. My name is Valarie." The girl next to me said cheerfully.
"Joanna. You can call me Jo." I smiled
"Call me Val." She smiled back.
"I havent seen you around here before. You new?" I asked.
"Nah. I just swiched from all my applied classes to academic." She said fumbling her pencil in her hands.
"Oh I see."
I'm suprised that I haven't seen her around before. If I did I know I would have remembered her. But it doesnt matter. We will probally become good friends soon.
Suddenly the movie paused. We all looked up to see the principal in the room.
"Good afternoon everyone. I'm just here to tell you to be carful on you're way home. There has been students going missing for the last few weeks and the police just wanted me to remind you" he smiled then walked off.
I thought nothing of it. They always give these kind of warnings.
"Nothing will happen." Val mumbled. I looked at her.
"Yeah probably not but it's good to warn us." I explained.
"Yeah." She agreed and fixed her short red hair that was in a pixie due.
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I closed my locker to find Val leaning agenst the wall.
"Give me you're phone." She sang.
"What? Why?" I laughed pulling my eyebrows together.
"Just give it to me." She frowned. I pulled my phone out of my pocket and handed it to her.
"Here." I said. She began typing.
"I forgot to give you my number before. So here." She smiled handing my phone back to me.
She gave me one more smile then danced down the halls.
I began walking to the bus when Andrew stoped me.
"Hey Joe." He smiled as he resed his arm on my sholder.
"What do you want Andrew?" I laughed. His pale green eyes shining.
"Ouch. Hurtful." He acted out being shot in the chest.
"Stop that." I laughed and pulled him off the ground.
"Okay okay. So anyway I'm comming over tommorrow." He smiled then walked away.
"Um okay?" I laughed.
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When I got home I threw my long brown hair in a messy bun, put on jogging pants and my light blue aropostal pullover.
"Witty here I come." I said to myself.
After a few hours of looking through quotes and adding some I got a phone call.
I looked at the screen and it read Val's number.
"Hey Val." I said still looking through quotes. All I heard through the backround was heavy breathing.
"Jo. Something happened." Val cried. I started to panic.
"Val what's wrong? Where are you?"
"I dont know. I was walking and somone came up to me. And-" she screamed then the phone hung up.
"Val? VALARIE?!" I yelled into my phone but there was no answer.
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166 faves · 34 comments · Dec 29, 2011 5:25pm

skyscraper13 · 1 decade ago
that was soooo amazing!
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leeuumm · 1 decade ago
good
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mol* · 1 decade ago
love it...on to chapter 2
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YhuKnowYhuWantSummaDis · 1 decade ago
Its really good but I dont understand the phone call. Val called saying that something was going on but if something bad were happening how would she have been able to call Jo?
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Breeze · 1 decade ago
I think the story you're writing is really great and I love the suspense your building but I don't know if I'll stick. I'm not used to such dialogue heavy stories but I guess they're popular on Witty. I hope you update often... I'll read your next chaptere soon =)
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lunadance3 · 1 decade ago
thats amazing!
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paramoregirl23 · 1 decade ago
WOW I love the suspense thats going on. keep up the good work.:)
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northpole16 · 1 decade ago
POST MORE. :D
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summerlove09 · 1 decade ago
hi!(: I read it, its really reallyy good! kept me interested the whole time and thats hard to doo lol keep it up ! <3
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gowiththewind · 1 decade ago
AMAZING! great job :) keep up the good work and write more please... i wanna see what happens :p
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lilly2hip · 1 decade ago
perfect please write more!!!
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stovan · 1 decade ago
:O what happened to VAL nooo i hate/like it when it ends mysteriously. good story :) you should add a little sentence of who andrew is
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LivingTheLife · 1 decade ago
i think its amazing keep up the good work :))
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AlexisCoral · 1 decade ago
Omg guys sorry about the spelling.. i didnt realise it was messed up :P
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emilxo · 1 decade ago
Really good keep it up! Check out my story & let me know what you think. ( :
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AlexisKaitlynn · 1 decade ago
This is really good. (:
But I'd add more detail about your main character, and some of the others, so the readers will know who is who and why they're acting how they're acting.. according to their personalities.
Lol, I like how you mentioned Witty in your story too. (:
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megannatalie · 1 decade ago
its goood!
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loveyou4ever · 1 decade ago
i really like it, i would add more about your main character, and andrew. its hard to tell what the relation is there I would add in little details like what class it is. overall its very good though.
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Wittygurl_4ever · 1 decade ago
I like it ! It's good:)
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XxcaliforniababexX · 1 decade ago
geets inteense... igot alil confused with all the turning of events first its the girl in class then the random kid at the bus stop then the fone call... but really intersting...
#commenting/faving/following<3
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