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1. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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   November 25, 2012 7:16pm UTC
   Beginning of
   Revenge.
   (Carter's P.O.V)
   chapter nine.
   "RACHEL?" oh my God, "RACHEL?! Are you okay?!"
   She doesn't answer, but coughs and spits out blood. "Rachel, come on it's okay. Stay with me!" I say rubbing my knuckles on her cheeks. I let out a cry and she looks towards me.
   "I forgive you," she mouths. "Take care of Aria..."
   I furrow my eyebrows and then i realise what she's trying to hint at... "NO! Rachel, don't give up!"
   "Its too much..."
   "No, Rachel i will not let you die!" I scream picking up my phone. I diall 911 again.
   "This is sargent Marshall." My friend says.
   "What are you taking so damn long for?! RACHELS DYING! SHES DYING!" I scream into the phone.
   "Young, they left 10 minutes ago, they should be there soon."
   I close my phone because i hear foot steps. I bring my finger up to my mouth and say shhhh just to let Rachel know that i hear something. She closes her eyes and nods.
   I slowly get up & walk over to the window. i look down and see my car door is open. How...
   "Carter!" I hear a man scream. It's him... he's back... What am i going to go?!
   "Where the f/ck are youi?!" he screams again.
   My heart drops. he's getting closer... i look down at Rachel & see her eyes are still shut and her arms are spreaded out...I don't think she's breathing...
   "Rachel?!" I whisper and get down. I pick up her hand and check for a pulse... nothing...
   "FREEZE YOU'RE UNDER ARREST FOR TRAFFICKING WOMEN." A man screems.
   I want to open the door... But i cant... Rachels...Dead?
   A/N: RACHELS DEAD?! OH GOD NO. 2 more chapters. Finally. This feels like a chore now. ._. sigh.
   
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3. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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   Beginning of
   Revenge.
   (Carter's P.O.V)
   Chapter Six.
   "Who? Rachel? Shes at her house-"
   "No...I don't think her moms home...Just go!...no...no...i cant go...What? She works at the grocery store...10am to 6pm. If shes not there, she'll be home soon...No...I have Aria with me...Don't worry, i won't hurt her...Just because i've worked for you for 6 years, doesnt mean i'm going to kill her...Because i don't kill little kids?...Nope. Just f/cking girls who mooch off of me...Take pictures of her mangled body, haha...No...I'm just kidding, thats sick...She is a manager at her job... Poor Rachel. They'll miss her...I actually think i might miss her... Call Felicity... Tell her to come pick up Aria... Because i have something i need to do... Just go. Goodbye, Antonio."
   I click my phone off and throw it on my counter. Running to my room, i quickly throw on a thick black sweater and stuff my gun and 679$ in my pocket. Its going to be a long ride to Seattle.
   Beep beep!
   i hear a horn go off.
   "Aria?" i whisper waking her up. Aria, Aunty Danielle is here. You're gonna go to her house, okay?"
   She nods in agreement, wiping her eyes then gets up and walks to the door.
   "It's about f/cking time!" Felicity screams getting back into the car. "Hurry the f/ck up, no one can see me."
   "Why cant no one see you?" Aria asks in wtonder.
   Felicity hesitates. "Well, because honey. Aunty is hiding from people."
   "Why?"
   "I'll tell you later."
   "Why not now?"
   "Because i'm busy! Just be quiet, Aria please."
   aria purses her lips and folds her arms in defeat.
   "Felicity, you do not have to be so rude to her."
   "She doesn't have to ask so many G/ddamn questions!"
   "Just leave her alone, okay?"
   She shuts her mouth and looks away focusing on the road.
   I look at my watch. 5:25. S/it!
   "Felicity, hurry the f/ck up!"
   "Wow!" She scoffs. "Ever so ready to kill your girlfriend, huh?"
   {A/N} Felicity... Alive?
   Teaser: "But... I love you Carter...-Carter! Why are you doing this to me? CARTER!"
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4. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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   October 22, 2012 8:33pm UTC
   Beginning of
   Revenge.
   (Carter's P.O.V)
   Chapter Five.
   ♣
   Going to Rachels moms to pick up Aria.
   Why that little girl loves me? No one knows.
   I pull up to the drive way and Rachel looks like her usual not so attractive self.
   I don't even know why i dated that girl. I'm so glad i cheated on her. Her usually sort of pretty hair is up in a high bun, and her eyes have dark circles under them. Probably from crying or something.
   Oh well she did this to herself.
   Actually, she looks alot skinnier... Like she hasn't been eating... Thats good parenting. Teaching your daughters not to eat? Cool. She doesn't even deserve Aria. I don't even understand how Aria could of came from that. Aria is so adorable with her big chocolate brown eyes, and her shoulder length brown hair. I have no idea how she could of come from Rachel. I mean yeah, Rachel was pretty at one point but then after she had her baby she just turned ugly.
   I hate her.
   I hate her so much.
   She better watch her back.
   {A/N} Carter finally shows her true colors. :)
   Teaser: She doesnt know who shes messing with.
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5. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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   October 16, 2012 6:34pm UTC
   Beginning of
   Revenge.
   (Rachels P.O.V)
   Chapter Four.
   ♣
   The first thing i did the next morning was get up and check on a peacefully sleeping Aria and then check the time. "5:23? Ugh, i'll just go back to sleep for a little while."
   I walked back to my bad and layed back down, only to hear a loud beep coming from my phone. I quickly sat up and grabbed my phone. 5 new messages. There was one from Anne, Carters mom; And then there was 4 from Carter. What the hell? I opened up Annes message and replied to it. She was asking if Aria could go over there today. "Sure," i replyed "Aria should be waking up in a couple of hours and Carter should be picking her up." I imagined a bubbly Anne with her coffee in her hands as she smiles and types back. She's an early bird. Always wake before 5. a second later i get another text. But not from Anne, From Carter. Again. I opened the message,
   "You'd text my mom back, and not me? May i ask why?
   I sighed and replied back.
   "Sorry. Right now i'd rather talk to your mother."
   It took him a couple of minutes but he finally wrote back
   "I'm not going to deal with this."
   "Then dont."
   "Why do you want to move all the way to the U.K? Sorry, you'd know what i'm talking about if you actually gave a damn enough to read my messages."
   my whole body went numb. How would he know about that? i exited out of our messages and went to his other unread messages.
   "Hey, i'm sorry about everything."
   -Sent- 10:46 pm.
   "So i just found a letter. You're moving to London? When?"
   -Sent- 12:23pm.
   "Rachel, you're not keeping Aria away from me."
   -Sent- 2:05 am.
   "Rachel! F/cking answer me!"
   -sent-4:22 am.
   i ran out of bed and grabbed my pants i put the letter in. It's not there! Did i drop it? Of course i did. How else could it of gotten there? Wait, I CANT keep Aria away f rom him? Who the f/ck does he think he is? I can do whatever i damn well please with my daughter. I grabbed my phone and typed in his number.
   "Yes?" He answers.
   "Who the f/ck do you think you are?"
   "Carter." i can almost feel him smile. "Or as my students like to call me, "Mr.Young."
   "Carter, do not think you can sit there and tell me what i can or can not do with my daughter!" I snap.
   he hesitates and then whispers
   "You're not going to London."
   "I wasn't," I smiled. "I was thinking more like Ireland. I hear it's pretty." I smile sensing his frustration.
   "No, you're not going anywhere."
   "Why not?"
   "Because if you leave me, I will contact Antonio and tell him your plans."
   {A/N} Witty was being stupid and not letting me upload this chapter, Sorry! I might as well stop notifying you guys, because i always get in trouble for being on the computer for too longs so just come back to my profile, okay? Im going to try to write more. This isn't going to be a really long story though.
   Teaser: "Rachel. stop squirming!"
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6. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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   October 12, 2012 7:52pm UTC
   WTF WITTY.
   Why you no let me post new chapter?
   Why you make it look retarded?
   WTF.
   FACK YOU.
   
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7. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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   October 7, 2012 8:10pm UTC
   Beginning of
   Revenge.
   (Rachels P.O.V)
   Chapter Three.
   ♣
   As i walked into my house, Carter was sitting on the couch, waiting for us.
   "Daddy, Daddy!" Aria screamed running towards him.
   "Hey princess!" He picked her up and gently held her close like if he would let go, she would disappear.
   I put my purse down one his couch and went back to the room to continue my packing, not once looking at him.
   When i put my last box of stuff next to the door, i went to the bathroom to pack up my soap and accessories.
   "Where are you going?" Carter said trying to hide the pain from his voice.
   "None of your business," I snapped.
   He put his head down and continued watching me. I swiflty grabbed my bag and dropped it on the bed and then i grabbed another box and headed for Aria's room. He followed.
   "You cant just keep her away from me," He whispered standing in her doorway as i started to pack up her stuffed animals.
   "Want a bet?" I snapped looking at him for the first time.
   I kow i cant keep her away from him. That would ruin her.
   "I'm sorry, Rachel."
   "No your not."
   "Yes i am!"
   "You know i work there, Why the hell would you go there and f/ck somebody in the stalls? Are you seriously that stupid that you would do something like that? When you knew i was working!"
   "I wasn't thinking, Rachel."
   "Obviously."
   He sighed and bowed his head. "Her name is Abigail. She is my old high school crush. I don't know... when i saw her... I just remembered all of those old fillings. Are you really going to hold that against me? Honestly Rachel?"
   old high school crush... when he said that, those words hit me like a ton of bricks. I started to tear up and he came and grabbed my face, brushing my cheeks with his thumbs.
   "If it makes you feel any better, i was buying you a dozen white roses."
   "I don't want to talk to you," I whispered walking away.
   ♣♣♣
   "Mommy, where are we going?"
   "To grandmas."
   "Grandma Anne?!" Aria beamed.
   "No, to Grandma Beccas."
   "Why?" she frowned looking at the floor.
   "Because mommys job is closer to grandma beccas house." i lied.
   "No!" She screamed.
   "Aria, I---"
   just as i was starting to talk to her, she threw her arms around Carter and screamed "I dont wanna go with mommy!"
   Great, even my kid wants to leave me.
   "Princess, mommy needs to take you to grandmas." he paused examining her expression; "I'll come pick you up tomorrow."
   I picked aria up and headed out the door towards my mothers car.
   {A/N} BORING CHAPTER ALERT! Sorry i didn't get the chance to notify you guys last time! I was being yelled at that i was on the computer for too long. Also, Sorry i didn't upload these last two times i was suppose to. I didnt have a computer! I kinda want to stop this story. Should i?
   Teaser: "Why do you want to move all the way to the U.K?"
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8. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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9. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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   Beginning of
   Revenge.
   (Rachels P.O.V)
   Chapter Two.
   ♣
   I started to shake. "Carter...How could you?"
   "Baby, i'm sorry..."
   "No!" i shouted as a tear rolled down from my eyes. "No, you're not. Because if you were; You wouldn't have done it in the first place. I hate you!" I took his ring off my finger, threw it at him and started to walk out.
   he screamed, "Rachel! I love you!"
   "F*ck you!" I screamed as the door closed.
   I ran to the back room to grab my purse and go. As i got closer to the door, my boss stopped me.
   "Rachel, i'm going to have to send you home. We have too many people clocked in."
   i quickly wiped my tears and smiled. "O- okay."
   "Are you okay?"
   "Yeah, im fine. Its nothing, really."
   he smiled, "Well okay then! Have a good good evening!"
   I walked into the door facing Adam. Wow, he was still watching the videos! Normally all people just sit there and text.
   "Whoa, Whats wrong with you? You looked like somebody just died or something!"
   I smiled, "It's nothing. I got sent home. There's too many people clocked in."
   "Oh, That sucks."
   I grabbed my purse and punched myself out.
   "Hey, here's my number. Call me if you need anything.": Adam smiled handing me a folded sheet of paper.
   I scrunched up my eyebrows, "Okay?"
   "Whoa, not trying to be creepy or anything, haha. It's just because you look like you need someone to talk too. Like a friend or someone."
   "No, it's okay. I totally get it." i smiled.
   ♣♣♣
   Once i got home, i looked at my clock. There was five more hours until i needed to pick up Aria, so i deceded to pass some time by cleaning.
   I quickly ran to my closet because i thought that i needed to start cleaning it out and putting everything in boxes because i could not even think about spending another night in Carters house.
   After i cleaned out half of the top shelf, i moved towards the back of the shelf and grabbed a box, a black purse fell down.
   "What the hell?" I whispered picking it up.
   I grabbed the purse and took it to the bed to dump all of the belongings out. The first thing that i noticed falling out was an I.D card.
   Felicity's I.D card.
   {A/N} This chapters pretty boring but idgaf haha. COMMENT FOR REMINDERS. I don't just keep going to your profile, i need you to actually comment. haha ohmygod so CARTERS A DOUCHE, HUH. I had to upload today because i'm not sure im going to have my computer tomorrow. I think i'm going to fail chemistry. Anyways... eh, life sucks. Do you guys have any ideas for what the characters should endure? (: THANKS FOR READING ME BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE. >.♥
   Teaser: The first thing Aria said was "How come daddy didn't pick me up?" The daddy she was refering to was Carter.
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11. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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    Beginning of Revenge.
    *coming soon.*
    ;)
    ♠sequel to "End of Innocence.♠"
    
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12. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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    End of Innocence.
    (Carter's POV)
    Chapter 12
    The clouds are dark grey, and the weather is rainy and wet. Rachel walks with a bright red rose in her hand which brings out her black dress into the cemetary towards his coffin. Josh's coffin, that is. Ever since she read the letter Josh gave her, she put the letter into a safe place and has no feelings towards anything but her growing belly. She's growing bigger everyday and soon enough she will be a mommy to a beautiful daughter who will be named Aria Rose.
    She bends over and whispers to josh, "I Love you josh." She wipes her eyes. "I will always love you. And i swear, he's going to regret all of this. I Promise." She pauses, "Josh? I forgive you. It just sucks that you had to find out thus way. This way! out of all of them! instead of talking, you turned to death. We could've!---" She stopped to look at me "Nevermind," she whispered placing the bright red rose on his cold body, and wrapping his fingers around it. "I love you Joshua." She said walking away. She wiped a tear away and smiled a big smile. Ever since she read the letter... I don't know, she just... There's something she isn''t telling me. Like she's holding something back... Would you guys know? No? Well shes been acting content. Like she's determined to do something. She's not sad, nor is she mad! I don't even know the word for her feeling, and i'm an english teacher!
    Something tells me the end of Rachel is yet to come.
    '
    -The end.-
    {A/N} Eh, i know its a pretty short ending chapter. :) FISH.
    HOLY MOTHER OF PEARL ITS THE EEEENNNDDD!!!!!
    -Or is it?
    Yep thats right people.
    There's going to be a seqel to this!
    It's called "Beginning of Revenge". ♥
    But you have to promise me that you will keep reading even though there is some boring chapters because i feel like i rushed through this first story. So yes, there will be some informational chapters, and they will be much shorter. I hope.
    So anyways, thanks for reading! It really means alot! I do it for you guys even though it's not really that good.
    GET PUMPED FOR "BEGINNING OF REVENGE!"
    Super excited. :)
    Teaser: I would know that voice anywhere.
    Comment/Rate/Fav. ask for reminders of "Beginning of Revenge" on my profile!
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    September 7, 2012 7:32pm UTC
    End of Innocence.
    (Rachel's POV)
    Chapter 10
    The next thing i know, i'm in the backseat of a car. No one is driving, but Josh is in the backseat sitting next to me.
    "You're okay?" He said smiling. I Remembered what happened, and started running my neck. I didn't respond.
    "I hit him. pretty hard." He said lowering his voice as if someone was listening. "He's back there," He pointed to the trunk of the car. I put my hand to my mouth. I was about to scream but he covered my mouth and said everything was going to be okay.
    "Rach, this wasn't suppose to happen." he looked away out his window. "You were never suppose to get hurt, let alone pregnant."
    I looked down at my baby. Was she going to be okay?
    I tried to open the door, but it wouldn't open.
    "Child lock," He smiled. "So that way you cont run away from me." This made me remember the time Carter rescued me. CARTER! checked my pockets looking for my phone.
    "I have that, too." He smiled. "I Needed to talk to you, Rach."
    I scrunched my eyebrows in responce.
    "Well, as you know, i am your best friend." he looked at me. I looked at him in disgust "Were," I corrected.
    he smiled. "I deserver that."
    I looked out the tinted window and stared at nothing. we were in the middle of nowhere.
    "What happened to Felicity?" I said keeping my gaze out of the window.
    "She killed herself. With her knife. She slit her throat."
    "BULLS*IT!" I screamed. "SHE WAS FOUND AT THAT HOUSE!"
    He smiled, "You never did believe me. That's your problem"
    "No. I did believe you. But then believing you almost got me killed."
    he looked at my stomach trying to change the subject.
    "He got like 4 or 5 other girls pregnant." He lowered his voice "I didn't care about those girls though. I care about you, Rach. I Love you." He gently kissed me on my cheek. I jerked my head away and said "Don't." I thought i saw a tear in the corner of his eye when he moved his way to the drivers seat. We passed by building of places i've never seen before, and just the thought of Josh taking me to a different house scared me. So i put my head down.
    "Get out," his voice sounding like it was cracking. i looked out the window, stunned to see i was at my own home, safe. He handed me my phone and before i could walk away, he grabbed my face for a kiss. "I Love you , Rach."
    I looked away and then walked to my house, stunned at what just happened.
    So, how do you guys feel about Josh? Ask me if you don't understand anything, i'll clear it up for you.
    Teaser: Because there's only one thing i'm capable of now. Revenge.
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    End of Innocence.
    (Rachel's POV)
    Chapter 8
    I woke up this morning with Carter wrapped around me, holding me close. 'I really love him,' i thought. He woke up. "Good morning gorgous," He whispered kissing the top of my nose. "Good morning Carter," I said kissing his forehead. "I have to get up and shower. School starts soon."
    "I'll be waiting for you," He said grinning.
    i quickly grabbed some clothes and ran in the shower. When i got out, i heard my phone ringing and wrapped a towel around me. I Answered the phone, expecting it to be my mother or father. Instead, it was my docter.
    "Rebecca Viera?" He said in his usual peaceful voice that would make anybody happy.
    "No, This is Rachel; Her daughter." I replied in my fake sweet voice.
    "Oh, that's even better,"
    He started to say something, but i didn't hear him. I was trying to be nosy and listen in on Carters conversation.
    "---, Do you understand? Ms. Viera?"
    "Huh? , I mean; Can you repeat that?"
    He sighed, "We recentally got your test results back. No, you are not in danger of any STD's, And you are currentally not hurt in anyway." I Sighed in relief.
    "But there is something else. You are 16 weeks pregnant. I know at your age, thats alot to take in, so i think you should seriously consider adoptin. If you have any questions, just contact me. Do you understand, Ms. Viera?"
    I Just stood there, stunned. I'm pregnant? 16 weeks? That's impossible. "I Understand." I replied. "Congradulations Ms. Viera!" He replied and was followed by a click.
    What if i WAS Pregnant? I Quickly ran to the bathroom and opened the towel just a crack. I thought i was getting pudgy, but i guess i really am pregnant. 'I'm pregnant,' I said to myself. Then it hit me. I Was pregnant. No, not with any customers babies, but with the mans baby. I was having the mans baby. Just that thought made me want to cry. A tear dropped, followed by many others until i finally wiped them away. I Went out of the bathroom and saw Carter on my bed, covoring his eyes. I didn't ask him what was wrong, i just layed down right next to him. He held me close and didn't let me go. Like he was afraid of losing me. Finally, he spoke. "My mom called." he whispered. "Rachel?"Carter breathed, his voice shaky. "They think they found a body. They think," He gulped. "They think it's Felicity."
    I didn't try to reply and tell him everything was going to be allright. Instead, i held him closer.
    "Carter, I'm... I'm pregnant." I cried.
    At first he was quiet. "You'll get through this," He hesitated. "We'll get through this."
    I just couldn't stress the thought of having the mans baby.
    Sorry if it's tooooooo long. I know, but this is a filler chapter type thingy. GET EXCITED FOR THE SEQEL. WOOOOOOOOOOOT! I know i am.(: 4 more chapters!
    Teaser: Josh lifted up my shirt and the man stared. His eyes grew wide when he saw my baby bump.
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    End of Innocence.
    (Rachel's POV)
    Chapter 7
    After school, i ran home and was greeted by an empty house. Just like every other day. I ran uptairs, threw my bookbag on my bed and answered my ringing phone. It was Carter. "Rachel? Is that you? Can i come over today? I need to see you."
    "Sure," I replied looking at mysel in disgust. "When do you think you'll be here?" I had to ask because i looked like a mess and i needed to shower.
    "I'd say about 30 minutes."
    "Okay."
    "See you then," He replied followed by a click.
    I quickly ran around my room and put everything back in its apropriate places and quickly made my bed, i finished with 15 minutes to spare and quickly jumped in the shower. When i got out, i got dressed and opened the door a crack to release all of the steam. "You smell good," A man said "Is that coconut?" I turned around expecting to see Josh but instead it was Carter. "Carter, You scared me!" I cried.
    "Im sorry Rachel, i didn't mean too, Honest." He said pulling me to a chair i had sitting next to my bed. He sat down and covered his face with his hands.
    "Rachel, Felicity didn't come home last night. Mom thinks shes at Josh's house, but i don't know..."
    "We need to go find her Carter,"
    He didn't respond, he just kissed me. I tryed to push him away because i wanted to go find Felicity but my body won and gave into temptation. I kissed back. He stood up and took off his shirt revealing his Perfect tan skin and lucious 6 pack and i just melted at the sight. He kissed me agauin, moving his way to my neck and then gently lifted up my shirt, showing off my red pushup satin bra. "You're so beautiful," He whispered lifting me up. He gently layed me down on my bed and lowered himself over me. I hesitated a moment. "We don't have to, Rachel" He said sounding sympathetic. Just his voice reasured me that everything was going to be all right. "I want too," I whispered
    "I promise i'll go gentle," He smiled.
    I Lifted my head up and kissed him.
    Suddenly all thoughts of Felicity and Josh were gone.
    So, i pretty much enjoyed writing this. (": Their pictures are my default if you didn't already know that. :3 5 and a half more chapters. Thanks for reading!
    Teaser: "Rachel?" He breathed "They think they found a body. They think," His voice was cracking "They think it's Felicity.
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    End of Innocence.
    (Rachel's POV)
    Chapter 6
    Its a monday, and as usual, i'm late to school again. I went aroud the corner or T-Wing, A building in my school, and saw Josh stuffing books into his locker. I tried to not make contact with him and look away but a girl that looked like a Freshman bumped into me and which made me bump into Josh. "I'm sorry," She said shyly keeping her head down. "It's okay," i murmered and tried to keep walking.
    "Wait!" Josh said forcefully grabbing my hand. "Felicity told you everything. she told me." He growled but tryed to keep his voice low so no one heard.
    "Let go of me!" I screamed sending heads turning in our direction.
    He quickly let my hand go, and people turned away.
    This time he looked away and smiled at his locker. "Oh Rachel," He laughed a sick laugh. "You are so damn innocent."
    "Not anymore," I breathed trying to find a teacher just in case. "What did Felicity tell you?"
    "Don't worry about it," He hissed sending shockwaves through my body. "I took care of it," He smiled. "Besides, the customers were getting worried they didn't have anyone anybody to take their anger out on."
    Suddenly, i was worried about Felicity.
    "Where is she?" I said loud enough for one or two people to turn around.
    "I said, don't worry about it." He hissed.
    My eyes grew wide, and panic surged through my body. My next instinct was to call Carter. I Grabbed my phone from my pocket and typed in his number. there was two rings, and then it went to voicemail. He's probably in the middle of teaching.
    Josh watched me as I put my phone back in my pocket. He smiled "You know what, Rach?" His smile grew wider "I Made a lot of money off of you."
    Before i could respond, The bell that signaled that we were late went off.
    "You should consider coming back." he said walking away with a sick smile.
    How do you guys like this chaaaaaaaaapter?(: I wasn't really feeling it, but oh well! Pictures will be put up on my profile today. Still not sure if i should put a picture of "The Man," But i think i will. Anyhoooo, Thanks for reading. You should reeeeally tell everyone about the story. (: Love you guys. ♥
    Teaser: Was i seriously considering going back to this house?
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19. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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    End of Innocence.
    (Rachel's POV)
    Chapter 5
    "what you saw on the bed," she scolded "was none of your business. And i swear, if you tell anyone, I swear i'll kill you."
    "What? I-"
    "Rach, are you okay?" Josh said running towards me but stoping to hold Felicity's hand.
    I didn't respond. I was so confused at what's happening, i just went in shock. First she's ALIVE, and second, She's threatening to KILL ME. She's going to KILL ME if i told anyone. Which i did.
    "Rach," Josh's voice caught me off gaurd. "Talk to me"
    "F*ck you." I whispered falling to the ground.He ran to my side and gently put his hand on my shoulder. I pushed his hand away. "Josh, Get the f*ck away from me" As i said that, i glanced toward's Felicity who was smiling and evil smile and crossing her arms together.
    I was positive Josh had something to do with what happened to me.
    "I hate you," I breathed, a tear dropping from my eye.
    "Rach, I-"
    "Leave!" I screamed pushing him away.
    Josh got up and slowly backed up. That's when Carter ran up towards me. "Rachel? Rachel, What's wrong?" Before i even got the chance to answer, Felicity decided to say something. "Carter, We're talking. Josh, go back to the house with Carter."
    "Fellice, shutup." Carter spat getting up. I'm guessing thats her nickname.
    "No, it's okay; We are talking Carter. I'll meet up with you soon." I said slowly getting up and wrapping my arms around his waist. "Okay," he whispered as he gave me a kiss, then he and Josh walked away back towards the house. When they were finally gone, Felicity looked like she was shaking. "Rachel, You cant tell anyone." she said getting pale "Seriously, no one can know" She came closer to me "And if i find out you tell anyone," She pulls out a pocket knife from her jacket pocket "This will be in more places than just my hand." She smiled as my eye's grew wide. "You're so naive." she hissed "How do you think Antonio found out about you?"
    "I don't, i don't know..."
    "Josh said he made enough money off of me. I was getting old to the customers, so he needed fresh meat," she smiled "Like you."
    "But he's my best friend..."
    "Which is why you can't tell anyone."
    "Wait, he sold you too?"
    She lowered her head "I love him Rachel. Don't tell anyone because if you do, He will go to prison and i will be alone. Yet again. I have to say, I liked the attention," she smiled "It made me feel... Loved. And i've never felt that way before."
    "Felicity, we have to tell someone."
    "No!" She screamed, "I won't let you!" That was when she took out her knife and placed it on my throat. "I swaer i'll cut," She said "Promise me you won't tell anyone!" She hissed as she pushed harder on the blade "I promise!" I screamed "I promise,"
    "Good." she said walking away.
    I was certain of 2 things.
    1) The girl from the bed was alive.
    2) Josh was the "Pimp".
    (A.N) comment if you're confused about anything. I'll try to clear it up. Also, i'll be uploading the pictures for the main characters soon. Sorry if it's confusing. I didn't really enjoy writing this.
    Teaser: He smiled "I made a lot of money off of you."
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