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  1. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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    September 3, 2012 1:06am UTC
    End of Innocence.
    (Rachel's POV)
    Chapter 3
    Part 2.
    I ran down the stairs and people were there, so i called out for help and all they did was point and laugh. I ran out the door.
    I didn't stop until i reached a near by elementary school that had just gotten out of session. The only times i would stop is to check if anyone was following me. No one ever was.
    I look back really quick while i was still running and i immediately run into someone, so i fall to the ground.
    He had dark hair and chocolate brown eyes with perfect tan skin.
    He reaches his arm out offering to help me up, but instead i back up.
    "Come on, i won't hurt you," he breathed gently grabbing my wrist. I tense at his touch.
    He stares at me for what feels like ever and then whispers something.
    "Hey, you're that kid that went missing, right?" I nod.
    "Come on, i'll drive you to the police station" he said pulling me to his car.
    I tried to run and hide but he kept holding on to my wrist.
    "I won't hurt you, remember?" he said with a slight smile.
    I was still a skeptic, but hey! Nothing worse can happen to me.
    He put me in the car and buckled in my seat belt. He got in the car and i heard a slight clicking noise. "Child lock," He smiled. "Because i don't want you to try to run away from me."
    I gave him a dirty look which made him laugh and then he whispered something.
    "By the way, my name is Mr. Young," he coughed "I mean Carter." He smiled. "Sorry i'm a teacher, you know?"
    I nodded and gave him a slight smile.
    As he pulled into the police station, a swarm of people gathered around his car. He got out and opened my door for me. Everyone started taking pictures.
    Suddenly, i wanted to run. As fast as i can and never turn back. Everyone was untrustworthy to me now. And then i saw my parents.
    I think i'm going to upload another chapter tonight, but don't get your hopes up!
    comment if you're confused about anything. I'll try to clear it up. Also, i'll be uploading the pictures for the main characters tonight. Should i put a picture of "The Man" or would you guys rather go off with what you picture?
    TELL PEOPLE ABOUT THE STORY!
    Thank you beautifuls.(:
    Teaser: And then i saw the girl. The same girl on the bed. With him.
    Comment/Rate/Fav. ask for reminders!

  2. Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX Xx_EndOfInnocence_xX
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    September 3, 2012 1:02am UTC
    End of Innocence.
    (Rachel's POV)
    Chapter 3
    Part 1.
    It's been a couple weeks so far since ive been here. They've given me "Customers" That i needed to "Please". What do i look like? some kind of prostitute? They never let me leave the bed. My only exception is to "Go wash up for my next customer" or use the bathroom, but i'm not allowed to wear clothes.. I'm starting to lose hope with my parents. My mom is a lawyer and my father is a widely known painter. They would search for me, right?I doubt it.
    The man ive come to know as Antonio, or Capone; which is his nickname i guess is sleeping next to me, pearched up on his chair next to my bed.The room is quiet.
    The only sound i hear is the news on the T.V which is on commercial. I quickly get up to go to the bathroom and "wash up." I give up trying to fight them.
    They just get even more mad, and they always win.
    My next customer is schedualed at 12:30 and it's 11:45.
    As i get up from my bed, the News come back on.
    I'm on the news.
    "16 year old Rachel Morgan Viera, has been missing for 2 weeks and 2 days. She was last seen by her mother getting into a 2012 Black Volvo with an older man. She was reportedly suppose to be going to a party when she went missing. It you have any news an this individuals whereabouts, please contact your local authoritied."
    "They are searching for me..." I whisper as a tear rolls down my right eye.
    I quickly look back at Antonio. He's sound asleep.
    I run to the restroom and search for clothes to wear. I find absolutely nothing but a grey robe with grease and blood stains.
    Being completely quiet, i exit the room and the man is still snoring loudly. I tiptoe to the door and before oppening it, i grabbed the purse. The same black purse that the woman had pointed at. I grab it and run.
    Part 2 next.

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