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The Sounds Within Silence
Chapter 4:
"Not today, not now. He cant, he cant!" She said to herself, in hope that he
could hear her voice. Though, she could barely hear her own voice over the talking
and beeping. She couldn't bear to watch him suffer, his life hanging
on by the red thread that connects them.
She looked down, and put her hands together. "God, i'm not very good
at this, I don't normally come to you..." She swallowed hard. "Please, give Max the strength to overcome this. He wouldn't even be in this situation if i were more careful. I'd do anything for him to survive through this. Please god.. Save Max! Amen..." She realized she'd been holding her breath this whole time. She let our a big sigh. She tightly held the cross again. "Mom, are you there? It's me again. Is there anything you and i can do? For me, for him.. he's all I have left. I love you mommy."
* * * *
He had no idea what was going on, or how much danger he was in.
He felt like he was in a dark room, but faintly heard Illiana's voice calling out to him.
"Babe, where are you? Please come find me.. someone explain what's going on..
i can hear, but why cant i see? I feel as if i'm watching myself from the outside, like im not even in my body.." He didn't feel pain.
He felt weightless. The only thing he felt was heartache, because he couldn't find Illiana. "Is anyone here? I feel like no one can here me, Illianna WHERE ARE YOU!?"
he shouted with all his heart and soul. He finally understood
what was going on. He was dying. He faintly heard a familiar voice. It was her mother's. "Hello?!? Melanie? I-Is that really you? Ohgod, maybe i really am dying.."
He heard her voice, he was sure of it. He still couldnt see though. "Max, You dont have
much time. Illiana is waiting for you to open your eyes! She's all alone, and she needs you. Try, with everything you can, to hang on to that thread. Try with all your might to open those beautiful eyes that she wantes to see, so badly! The fact that i'm able to talk to you, isnt a good sign. Now hurry up and get back to her! She misses you. I'll talk to you again soon, Let Illianna know that I got her message, okay?" He smiled. "I will try, as hard as I can, I promise."
******
She was filled with anxiety. "Open your eyes..Open your eyes..Open Your eyes.." she kept repeating it. Until finally, he started to make noises. She shot up from her bed, and hurt the incision wound made on her stomach. She blocked out the pain. She wouldn't miss this moment. "Come on Max..I know you can do it."
She hadn't stopped crying, and couldn't control it anymore. She let out a scream. "PLEASE MAX!"
And after that, he opened his eyes. She was filled with so much joy, the nurses had to hold her down so she wouldnt spring up to go hug him. Everyone let out a very relieved sigh. He said to her, "babe, I came back. For you. Oh, and your mom told me to tell you that she got your message."
Yet again, she broke down into tears, and gave him a huge smile.
She looked up, and spoke quietly. "I love you mom."
Then, she made a promise to Max.
"No matter what, neither one of us leaves without the other, promise?"
"Promise."
My writing kinda sucks. lmao, ohwell, deal with it :P

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The Sounds Within Silence
Chapter 3:
"Something isn't right." She thought. Something was
off, and she knew it.
Something definitely went wrong during the surgery.
She had an absolutely awful taste in her mouth,
and she didn't know why. Her stomach was uneasy. It hurt,
much worse than it did before, but why? It felt like she was hungry. It was
a feeling of hunger, pain, and that feeling you get when your about to make a huge decision in your life; it just hurt. Though, she didn't know why she felt like that. The surgery was done, and the
mere thought of food made her want to vomit. Her broken leg felt much heavier
than the other, and she was very confused. She was still
a bit out of it from her injection before the surgery. She realized that
her eyes were still shut. She couldn't open them. She tried and tried, but couldn't. Her eyelids were heavy. "Damn insomnia." she angerly thought. She felt a sharp pain in her mouth, that quickly faded into a warm numbness. Her eyes
opened. She looked down, and her eyes widened at her gown and
sheets, which were beginning to be covered with blood. The pain returned to her mouth. She touched her lip, which felt raw. She looked at her finger, which was now smothered in blood. "Oh crap.. i musta bit my lip in my sleep..?" She looked at the blood on her finger. She had a flashback from last night. She didnt want to remember, but she did. She remembered the pain, and the heartache. Oh how she longed
to see Max. He's the closest thing she had left to family. She lived alone,
at a young age. Her family's lives were taken a few years ago right before her
eyes by a robber. She managed to escape death. If she lost Max.. there would be
nothing left. Her heart was filled with hatred for the robber, hatred for the gang members who started the fire, stabbed, and shot at her.. and love for Max, and her family. She
clenched the metal cross around her neck."Thank you mom.. for protecting me, and being my guardian angle. You dont need to keep protecting me.
I might see you soon." she thought.
She remembered what happened before she passed out. "Max!"she accidentally said
out loud. She looked over, with hope in her heart. The curtain was now open. It truly was Max. But seeing him wasn't exactly a happy event. He was attached to a bunch of machines and wires, and was covered in bandages and bruises. She burst into tears, which only hurt her
stomach even more. She realized she was still clenching the cross around her neck. She held it so tight, it was beginning to pierce thought her skin. She let go. The instant she let go, Max opened his eyes.She felt the magic in the room. His big, brown eyes..were definitely a sight for sore eyes.
His eyes were the only things that were un damaged. His arm was broken,
his throat slit, but somehow, by a miracle, he was breathing. And he still looks beautiful. She couldn't tell if he could really see her or not, and she wiped her tears,
just in case. He looked peaceful, despite the situation he
was in. He always had that look on his face. The look that is like sunshine in the rain. He gave her hope.
She finally was able to speak. "M-M-Max....? I was so worried. How are you feeling?"
He squinted his eyes. His mouth began to move, and she couldn't make out the words.
She said "Max, I love you. You are my everything. I want you to try your hardest to stay alive, okay?" She spoke with tears running down her cheeks. The tears stung when they hit her lips, and it hurt when she talked, but it didnt matter. Max's mouth moved again.
She could not hear him, but it looked like he was saying "I love you too."
He shut his eyes. Her eyes widened, she was now scared, and said "M-max?! Max! " They stayed shut. She Called for help. Two doctors and a nurse rushed in.
She spoke again, "MAX!"

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The Sounds Within Silence
Chapter 2:
Heart racing. Head pounding. The sound of hospital doors being slammed against walls awoke her from her unconsciousness.
"What the hell...?" She was strapped down. She couldn't move her arms.
She had no idea where she was. There was a gas mask on her face, and she felt the piercing needles in her arms. There were at least 7 people rushing her down a long hallway.
She came to the realization as to what was going on. Her painful wounds forced her to remember. She went into a state of shock. Max. She tried to sit up,
but was instead forced
down by the straps. She almost made the gurney tip. One of the nurses said "Sweetie, don't push yourself. Your in critical condition, don't move around too much.
Your wounds will start to bleed again." She lifted her head, and said something. h
er voice was muffled from the mask. "Just a minute or two more, and i'll take
off the mask. Relax." She was irritated. She wanted Max. She wanted to hold his hand, feel his touch, and see his beautiful twinkly eyes again. "Is he okay?!" she managed to get herself heard through the mask. The nurse gave her a sad look, and bit her lip.
NO. NO NO NO. MAX. Please, please be okay.. The nurse didn't say anything.
Illiana spoke again, and sat up, forcing the straps to loosen enough for her to have room to breathe. "I asked if Max was okay. Where is he? i need to see him."
She knocked the mask off her face.
"IM TALKING TO YOU! WHERE IS HE!" The nurse simply told her
not to get worked up. "HOW CAN I NOT GET WORKED UP?!" Max..Max..Max.. The look on his face when he started his sentence back at the house flashed in her mind. She clenched her fist. She couldn't contain herself. The stress of this situation was too much for her to bare. The moment kept replaying in her head.. and she couldn't escape.
The nurse interrupted her thoughts. "We're here". They opened the door to her hospital room. They brought her over to the bed, and got her all set for surgery to remove the bullet from her stomach, and to close her stab wounds. She didn't want to go back to sleep until she
knew Max was alright. Then the doctor came into the room.
He asked her questions, and she answered. "Now, im going to ask YOU a question." she said. He replied, "Alright, what is it?" "No one is answering me. Where is max? How is he?" He gave her a look that cant be expressed in words. She immediately thought the worst, and looked away.
"Im not too sure. We may be able to save his life, we may not. Basically, he's knocking on death's door. He's in a much worse condition than you. Consider yourself lucky that you only took on the damage you did." She Burst into tears. "Its my fault." she said, under her
breath. The doctor apologized, and left the room. She was alone, so alone.
She wanted to see Max. The love of her life. Oh how much she loved him. everything about him.
His Awkward smile, his straight black hair, his sweet smell. Oh how her heart ached
to hold him in her arms, just to see his face, to know he's alright. That's all she wanted. She didn't care that her leg was broken, or that there was a bullet lodged inside of her
from a gang bang. She just wanted Max. Their love was deep, and she wondered what would have happened if Max hadn't shown up that night.
The nurse returned to the room. She said that Illiana was ready to undergo surgery. Before they gave her the injection, it sounded like the person behind the curtain, who was sharing the same hospital room as her, said her name. Her eyes widened, and she looked over to see who it was, but the curtain was closed.
The nurse gave her the injection.
"M-Max..?"
The room slowly faded into darkness, and she coulda swore she heard Max's voice say "I'm alright, now go to sleep."
She was awestruck. "Am I imagining this? I can't tell..if its real.....or....if.......im.....dreaming....-"
Mid-sentence, she fell into a deep sleep, being at ease, hoping Max will be there, safe when she awakens.
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