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I want to go back;

go back to the time
when everything was right

where we were still friends
and the things i said today
would be still unspoken


we would smile for hours
just looking into eachothers eyes
holding hands kept us warm
hours flew by but the memories still last

I wish I could turn back time;
I turned you down,
without even realizing what I have done.

If I did it all right,
I wouldn't be crying here
I wouldn't be cold
I wouldn't be alone
I would be with you

If only I could turn back time...


*can you please react on this and give tips to make my poem better?
I worked really hard on it and i would appreciate your adjustments. =)




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I want to go back; go back to the time when everything was

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Redheadlover

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