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PROLOGUE:

        Moonlight shines through the forest, casting spooky shadows on the ground below. Wind whispering through the trees. The eery silence of the night is deafening. Close by there is the sound of something crunching through the autumn leaves.
 

        The person stands tall with a black hood over their head. They look over their shoulder every few seconds as if to justify they’re alone. Next to them is a girl, underdressed for the blistering cold night in nothing but a blue tank top, some pajama pants, and boots.
 

        The girl follows the mystery person until they come to a cabin by the cliffside.
 

        The cabin looks long abandoned, with broken shutters and peeling paint. They walk up the front steps of the cabin. The wood creaked with every step taken. The hooded person opens the door which is barely hanging on its one hinge. 
 

        The girl breaks down at the door, crying into her hands. The other person grabs her wrist and yanks her upright, forcing her along. The girl notices the hooded figure appears to be a man. 
 

        What will he do to her? How long will she be here? Why her?
 

        She breaks from her thoughts and realizes the man has stopped pulling her. Yet, she was still following him.
 

        Why doesn’t she make a run for it?
 

        Without hesitating, she turns and runs up the stairs, out of the basement she has willingly followed the man into. She reaches out to grab the door. As she touched the doorknob with her fingertips, she felt a sharp pain on the side of her head. And then, darkness.

 
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PROLOGUE: Moonlight shines through the forest, casting spooky

1 faves · 2 comments · Aug 12, 2013 2:13pm

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story · scary · creepy · prologue · kidnapping · kidnapped

Real_Girl · 1 decade ago
Ok so not to be a big B butt... I don't like how she just realizes its a man. The girl and the guy with the hood should get into like a fight cause she is trying to leave and she feels like the scrubby on his face or something.
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juliarose417 · 1 decade ago
I appreciate the feedback thanks (:
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