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Golden Boy
chapter three

Brooklyn 

I survived day one of senior year. I was headed out to the parking lot to meet Mackenzie at her car. Mackenzie Benson has been my best friend since the sixth grade. It was one of those things you don't really know how you became friends but you just feel like you always have been. That was me and Mackenzie. I knew Mackenzie was probably still walking to her locker, even though most people were finishing up and leaving school, she doesn't feel the need to rush. So I waited outside her car by myself. As I waited Drew Mazz, Jack Elliot, and Vinny walked by. I didn't want to look at any of them but I felt one of them looking at me. So I glanced up to see Vinny looking at me. Ugh. I purposely looked away and thankfully saw Mackenzie heading my way. 
"Girl open the doors." I called out. I saw her fish into her bag. 
BEEP BEEP. 
I swung the door open quick and didn't bother looking back to see if he was still looking at me. I didn't want to know. I didn't care. Mackenzie finally joined me in the car. 
"Hey girlie, how was your day?"
Normally we wouldn't have to ask this question because our schedules had aligned since freshman year. Wouldn't it be that senior year that we have not a single class together.
"Well my days starts, goes on and finishes with the "Golden Boy." I said. 
"Get out! Vinny's in all your classes?"
"Every single one."
"Thats crazy. I'm sorry. Maybe he'll just stay out of your way."
"He's been staring at me all day. Its creeping me out."
"Did you ever think maybe he still cares?"
My jaw dropped. Mackenzie knew better than to talk about this. Vinny made it perfectly clear freshman year the thing that was more important to him. It was baseball. Relationships and people don't matter to him. 
"Don't even say that. Kenzie you know how he is. He doesn't do relationships. He just plays baseball and hooks up with girls."
"Brooklyn."
"Mackenzie please just don't." 
I flipped her the visor in the car down. I didn't want to hear her talk about how he did like me, how he did care, how baseball wasn't more important that it was just important. I didn't want to hear it because it wasn't true. Did he like me? Maybe. Did he care? Maybe. Was baseball more important than me? Absolutely was. Vinny was always going to car more about baseball than girls. I took a minute to look at myself. Despite how I was feeling at the moment my eyes looked bright, I still had a nice tan going from the summer, and my hair looked good long and straight. I maybe only be five foot three compared to my blonde five foot six blue eyed best friend,I was cute. I could get a guy right? Maybe it was time to start trusting boys again.
Maybe it was time to move on.

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Golden Boy chapter three Brooklyn I survived day one of senior

9 faves · 3 comments · Jul 19, 2013 11:37pm

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ArtLover · 1 decade ago
omg i love this story <3
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
so good and i agree with her... wait a second.... why is there no down arrow? god i hate people. I agree with dapz95
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dapz95 · 1 decade ago
very nice girlie!
you wanna know why this story seems to be a lot nicer than some of the others? it's got a lot of substance going on. you know - the story lines a bit bigger and complicated than i-hate-you-i-love-you-lets-kiss-lets-not. Maybe you could expand on that more weaving the romance into different areas ... you know, focusing on family, then freinds ... the romance can develop through other experiences
know what I mean?
thank you for the notifications - keep sending!
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