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Whisper My Name
Introduction
Ronnie's P.O.V

 I can see my breath when I walk out to the bus.
My freshly curled hair is almost frozen. I stand on the corner of my road,
waiting to go to the h*ll hole that other people call school. When I see the bus
barelling down the road, I see a kid sprinting towards me.
I move out of the way, but he stops when he gets to me.
I laugh quietly when he gets on the bus, sweating in the fifty-degree weather.
But, d*mn, he can run fast. I sit in the back, and show off my new tattoo on my wrist.
It says 'Vivi la vita ribelle'. It's italian for 'live the rebel life'.
Someone else in the back sells me a cigarette, and I debate on smoking it now.
It's too late. We're at school. I smile when I see my 'boyfriend' in the hall.
"Hey, Carter." He greets me with a kiss. You see, I don't even love him.
He doesn't love me either.  We're just using eachother to p*ss off our parents.
But, secretly, I just want to fall in love... 

 Note:
This is just the beginning of a story, so I know it's short, but it's giving me a lot of options for it.  I hope you guys like it, because I like it a lot already. I don't want to notify, but if you think you'll read it all, comment asking me, I might notify you. 

 

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AMillionWishes · 1 decade ago
Love it<3
Notify? I'm hooked & will stay hooked throughout this story. You've got potential.
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