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My Winter Bucket List

The Bucket List series
 
Chapter 18


I dump all of my presents on the floor of my room, not bothering to put them anywhere in particular. By this time it's eleven AM, so I pull on some skinny jeans and a long grey jumper over a white vest top. The present I bought Dorian is on the dresser, and the plastic bag's in the bin.
"Merry Christmas?" I hear behind me. The voice sounds distant, and when I turn around I realise it's because Dorian's speaking through the closed window. I smile when I see him and open the window.
"How long have you been sitting up there?" I ask.
"For about five seconds, now let me in, it's cold out here," he says. I smile as I move away from the window. He climbs through the window, being careful not to slip on the window sil, and making sure he doesn't use his right hand too much. I close the window once he's through before he embraces me in a hug. His body's cold and it makes me shiver slightly. "Sorry Rainbow," he says. "But it's cold outside and you're all warm." I nod and hug him a bit tighter for a few seconds. "Now," he starts. "Want your gift?" He asks. I smile up at him, nodding.
We let go of eachother and he opens his backpack. He pulls out two small packages. I sit on the bed as he passes them to me and I open the smallest one first. He sits next to me, watching. I look at the present and smile. Inside the layers of paper is a small pack of three different-coloured lip rings. I smile at him and laugh slightly.
"Thought you'd like it," he says. "Now open the other. I'm proud of what I got you - go open." I nod and do what he says. Inside the other present is a small blue photo frame - about the size of my hand. The picture is of two people - one a blue-haired guy and the other a multi-colour haired girl - laughing with a largish dog sit across their laps. I know that's Dorian and I. It was taken back in that month or so we were dating. The dog's called Nathan. I think I remember that photo - when it was taken.
"Jason took this," I say quietly, smiling. Dorian wraps an arm around my shoulders.
"Yeah," he says, agreeing. I trace my thumb over the picture before looking up at Dorian. I smile and press my lips against his. I feel him smile as we kiss, his arm lower down to my waist, and his arms envolope me. I then wrap my hands around his neck. He pushes himself slightly into my and when I open my eyes, he's pulled away slightly, staring at me. After a few breaths, he looks down smiling shyly.
"I don't really want to give you your present now," I tell him.
"Why?" He asks, looking back at me.
"Because mine's worth nothing compared to yours," I say. He shrugs and says it'll be good anyway. So I get up, take the present from the dresser and give it to him.
"God, you wrap up presents neatly, don't you?" He asks, smiling. I nod, knowing it's true. He unwraps it and grins at me when he sees the CD cover. "I thought this might be it," he says, grinning.
"I kinda gave it away - didn't I? By texting you to see if you wanted or had it?" I say, smiling. He looks up at me, and pulls me down onto his lap.
"It's great - thank you," he says. I smile at him."
"Merry Christmas," I tell him.
"Merry Christmas, Rainbow," he says. We're just about to have our lips meet when a voice from behind us stops us.
"Merry Christmas Dorian!"



I really, honestly feel like I have literally no one reading anymore. I have the same great readers - who I love, but I don't seem to get comments anymore, whether it's notes to help me, or just to ask for a reminder. I'm sorta happy the story's ending - so I can start something different - though I'm not sure what. So, comment for a reminder, and thank you for reading.
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