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Shattered Heart

Chapter Seven
Haley
 

Its Friday, and everyone at school is buzzing about their weekend plans. My now, one and only friend, was complaining about having to babysit her cousin.
"What about you, Haley?" She asked.
I thought about my answer hard.
"Uh-same old same old. Just sitting at home." I left out the part about probably being molested by my father and hit by my mother. She doesn't need to know all of that.
"Hal, you have to do some-" As if right on cue, Kyle walked over towards us.
"Oh my god, those eyes." I whispered to myself.
"What was that, Haley?"
"Nothing, nothing." I giggled.
"OH!" Aleeah said loudly. Kyle looked down and laughed.
His laugh was adorable. And those eyes-oh my gosh. They were gorgeous. They were enchanting.
Aleeah took the hint and pranced away joyfully. I remember when I was that happy.
"Hey Haley." Kyle grinned.
"Hey! What's up?" I asked, blushing.
"Well, nothing. I was wondering if we could change that, and maybe go out for lunch tomorrow?" Kyle asked confidently. I felt my cheeks getting warm as I thought of an excuse to get out of the house.
"Sure, I'll meet you at Cabella's at one."
"Yeah, sure." He said.
"Ok." I said.

He went to walk away but turned back around pointing his finger at me.
"You do know, that this isn't supposed to just be a friendly meeting right?" He asked.
"What?" I asked confused.
"Look, when I layed eyes on you, you just blew me away. There's something about you. This isn't just two people hanging out, this is a date." He said.
"Are you sure you arent confusing me for someone else? Like, Aleeah, she looks a bit like me." I said quickly, joining my words together.
"I'm positive. So, are you still on for the date?" He asked shyly.
I thought about it. If my dad found out I was going on a date I would surely be dead.
"Yeah, sure." I smiled at him.
"Ok, good." He then walked away, leaving me with a grin.

I smiled, this was my first date.

 

I dont really like this chapter. I don't know. Theres just something about it that annoys me. It doesnt fit the plotline that you guys have set up in your minds, I can probably promise that.
By the way, Aleeah's name is pronounced Uh-Lee-Uh.
Here are the updated characters:

http://www.polyvore.com/shattered_heart_a
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