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Status: Working on a new story, Shattered Heart

Member Since: 15 Jun 2012 12:09pm

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About Me

This is my story account, I enjoy writing as it puts my mind at ease and helps me smile. My current story is New Years Luck, but as I have finished writing it and it is just a matter of uploading it I will in a couple of days start a story called Shattered Heart. Yes, I know, crappy title name but it will all be explained throughout the story. I'm unsure about continuing it because of the topic and plotline so feedback would be greatly appreciated.

 
You can hate on me all you want. Wanna know why? I'm going to tell you anyway. Because it doesn't bring me down. It won't bring me down, no matter how hard you try. It doesn't bother me, and if anything, it makes me stronger. It just reminds me that I am not perfect, no where near it, and I never will be. So bring on the hate, hit me with the best you've got and fail. It'd be fun to watch.

My main accounts username is quite obvious if you can read but if you are iliterate then how the hell are you reading this? Anyways, if you just can't use common sense then my main account is Buki.
If you want to have a conversation, go right ahead just not on this account, on my main account. Feel free, I haven't figured out a way to bite people through a computer screen yet so you are in luck.
If you have any comments questions suggestions or feedback about my stories feel free to drop a comment and I will check it out. So, read my stories if you're interested, ask for notifications on every chapter if you want them, and we'll see where that takes me.

Thanks for wasting your time and reading about me and reading my stories, its greatly appreciated.

 

 

  1. BukisStories BukisStories
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    September 28, 2012 11:13am UTC
    I'm very sorry
    I can't finish Shattered Heart. I have so much to do now, and I'm not on the computer as much as I used to be, and I'm constantly worrying about feeling awful because I haven't posted in a while. Most of you probably figured out that I wasn't going to be able to finish, I just want to make sure you all understand. I really was looking forward to writing this story, but I just can't. If I can, every once in a while I may post the next chapter, there really are only about five of them left. I can't possibly explain how sorry I really am. If I do finsih the story, it will be my last until May, but I very possibly just won't write anymore. Please find it in you to understand, I know that I left you guys hanging and you probably really want to know how it was going to end, and if you can't possibly stand not knowing how it ends feel free to comment and ask me, I'll tell you if you'd really like.
    Again, I'm really sorry.

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    September 5, 2012 7:02pm UTC
    Just an update...
    I once again, am in that apologizing situation for not posting. Like I said before, school has started and every night i have at least two hours of homework. I honestly, might only be able to post on weekends, because I don't think you guys would want me to just stop in the middle. Really, I truly am sorry, and take full responsibility.
    Please forgive me, I will post as soon as possible.

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    Shattered Heart
    Chapter Eleven
    Haley
    The rest of the weekend went by quickly. There wasn't any school on Monday because of Teacher Workshop. Surprisingly, there hadn't been any more problems with my mom or dad either.
    When I walked into the school I heard the same people barking nasty words at me and saw the same people giving me disgusted looks.
    I saw Aleeah at my locker and was able to plaster a smile on my face, even though I was dying on the inside.
    "Hey!" I beamed. Aleeah grabbed my injured wrist and pulled me away from everybody. As she did so, my sleeve came up the slightest bit. I could see a small bit of the big cut, but she didn't seem to notice. When she released my wrist I was relieved, and I pulled my sleeve back down.
    "Sooooo. How was your date with Kyle?!" She exclaimed.
    "Aleeah," I sighed. "It was fine." I groaned.
    "Fine? Just fine?" She questioned.
    I pursed my lips knowing that she was right.
    "It was good." I said rolling my eyes.
    "Suurrrreee. Seriously, tell me about it." She breathed.
    I explained my date with Kyle to her and she was practically hopping up and down like a rabbit.
    "Ooooooooooh! He so digs you!"
    "I doubt it. What's there to like anyway?" I asked crossing my arms. Aleeah looked at me as if I had just insulted her hair.
    "Everything!" She yelled.
    "No." I shook my head at her.
    "Yes!" She pushed.
    "Aleeah, theres a lot you don't know!" I snapped. I didn't mean to, it just...happened. Her face swirled up and she once again took me by the wrist, but lead me to the bathroom.
    "Like what!?" She questioned furiously. Her eyes started looking around, and found my wrist. My sleeve had been pulled up a bit, and she had caught sight of one of my cuts. She took her hand and lightly pulled my sleeve up to my elbow to uncover all of my cuts. Her jaw dropped, and she stared into my eyes, waiting for me to say something until I finally did.
    "Like that."
    I really am so so so sorry for not posting lately. You realy have no idea how bad I felt when I couldn't. School has stared and stuff has started to come up in my life and fitting in witty is just really hard.
    I wanted to make up for not posting, so go read the chapter thats after this, it is already posted!
    Comment asking to be notified for the next chapter if you want to be.
    I adore every single of my readers, the fact that you found this story and decided to read it just really makes me smile. So thank you.
    <3

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    Shattered Heart
    Chapter Eight
    Haley
    I'm not the prettiest, sweetest, or smartest girl, so it blew my mind to think I was going out on a date. Why me? Why not Rachel, she's absolutely gorgeous.
    I looked in the mirror, I was wearing a coral colored, wavy tank top and indigo flare jeans. My shoes, were simple black sandals. My hair was straightened, pink lipstick and light black eyeshadow with black mascara and eyeliner on the top of my eye.
    I was worried about my cuts showing, so I took foundation and covered them up. Explaining my cuts is not how I would imagine my first date going.
    I grabbed my purse, closed my door and started down the stairs. As I approached the bottom of the sweeping staircase my father jumped in front of me, blocking me from the door.
    "Where are you going?" He barked.
    "Out with a friend of mine." I teased.
    "Oh, you have friends now?" My father laughed. "I dont see how someone would want to be friends with you. Who is the idiot?" That stung. That stung a lot, I was feeling more confident than ever, and he ruined it in the blink of an eye without any problem. Just like that.
    "Aleeah." I breathed, fighting tears from spilling over my eyelids.
    He took a step towards me, examining my body. He put his hands on my waste, moving them up and stopping at my chest as he began to kiss my neck.
    "No." I growled pushing him off of me.
    When he looked back up at me as if "No." Wasnt an option he opened his mouth to speak
    "Later. You'll have no choice then. Get out." He demanded.
    I rushed out of my house before he had a chance to change his mind.
    * * * *
    "Hey there beautiful." Kyle called out.
    "Thank you." I said sweetly.
    "Order whatever you like, no budget." I looked over the menu, but felt like someone was staring, so I looked back up to see Kyle staring into me.
    "What?" I asked.
    "Its hard to take my eyes off of someone as gorgeous as you." Kyle hummed, sliding next to me and putting his arm around me.
    I smiled, and my cheeks were getting warm.
    Kyle's phone rang, and he walked off anwering it. I tried to listen, what with me being nosy and all. I could only catch the last few words.
    "I love you too hun, see you later." He said in a sweet voice before walking back over.
    "Sorry." He coughed.
    "No, no. It's fine, who was it?" I asked.
    "Just my mom. You know, you really are gorgeous."
    I smiled brushing it off.
    What I forgot was that things are easily hidden.
    Hehehe. This is one of my favorite chapters. Here's Haley's outfit:
    http://www.polyvore.com/shattered_heart/set?id=56985294
    Comment asking to be notified for the next chapter if you want to be. *If you are under 13, I will not notify you for the next chapter. No exceptions.
    I seriously love every single of my readers, thank you for reading this story.
    <3

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    Shattered Heart
    Chapter Seven
    Haley
    Its Friday, and everyone at school is buzzing about their weekend plans. My now, one and only friend, was complaining about having to babysit her cousin.
    "What about you, Haley?" She asked.
    I thought about my answer hard.
    "Uh-same old same old. Just sitting at home." I left out the part about probably being molested by my father and hit by my mother. She doesn't need to know all of that.
    "Hal, you have to do some-" As if right on cue, Kyle walked over towards us.
    "Oh my god, those eyes." I whispered to myself.
    "What was that, Haley?"
    "Nothing, nothing." I giggled.
    "OH!" Aleeah said loudly. Kyle looked down and laughed.
    His laugh was adorable. And those eyes-oh my gosh. They were gorgeous. They were enchanting.
    Aleeah took the hint and pranced away joyfully. I remember when I was that happy.
    "Hey Haley." Kyle grinned.
    "Hey! What's up?" I asked, blushing.
    "Well, nothing. I was wondering if we could change that, and maybe go out for lunch tomorrow?" Kyle asked confidently. I felt my cheeks getting warm as I thought of an excuse to get out of the house.
    "Sure, I'll meet you at Cabella's at one."
    "Yeah, sure." He said.
    "Ok." I said.
    He went to walk away but turned back around pointing his finger at me.
    "You do know, that this isn't supposed to just be a friendly meeting right?" He asked.
    "What?" I asked confused.
    "Look, when I layed eyes on you, you just blew me away. There's something about you. This isn't just two people hanging out, this is a date." He said.
    "Are you sure you arent confusing me for someone else? Like, Aleeah, she looks a bit like me." I said quickly, joining my words together.
    "I'm positive. So, are you still on for the date?" He asked shyly.
    I thought about it. If my dad found out I was going on a date I would surely be dead.
    "Yeah, sure." I smiled at him.
    "Ok, good." He then walked away, leaving me with a grin.
    I smiled, this was my first date.
    I dont really like this chapter. I don't know. Theres just something about it that annoys me. It doesnt fit the plotline that you guys have set up in your minds, I can probably promise that.
    By the way, Aleeah's name is pronounced Uh-Lee-Uh.
    Here are the updated characters:
    http://www.polyvore.com/shattered_heart_a
    leeah_haley_kyle/set?id=56896242#stream_box
    Comment asking to be notified for the next chapter if you want to be.
    Feedback would be greatly appreciated, as always.
    I adore my readers.
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    Shattered Heart
    Chapter Six
    Haley
    I went through the rest of the day as usual, but for some reason I couldnt get that boy out of my mind. He had actually been nice to me, and then apologized for everyone elses behavior.
    I walked into my next class, with the boys face burned into my mind. Taking a seat in the fourth row, I took my folder out.
    One of Rachel's friends walked my, slamming my folder onto the floor. When I went to bend down to pick it up, my hand brushed someone elses.
    "Seems like you're always losing this folder." The boy remarked handing it to me.
    "Thank you." I told him.
    It was the same boy. The boy that I just couldn't stop thinking about for some reason. I shouldn't feel this way about him. I had to snap out of it.
    * * * *
    As I started to walk home I heard someone scream.
    "Wait, wait, wait!" The boy that I'd been thinking about all day called.
    I assumed it was to another girl, probably his girlfriend. He was handsome enough, and sweet enough to have a girlfriend. What had I been thinking? I didnt stand a chance with a guy like him anyways. But my heart still fluttered when I saw his face.
    "Haley, right?" He asked.
    Wait, what? He was talking to me? My stomach knotted up into a ball and I felt like something inside of me was doing cartwheels. And he knew my name? This was so confusing, we had just met today. How did I already feel this way about him?
    I felt my cheeks get warm and I lowered my head in attempt to hide me blushing. No. I shouldn't feel this way.
    "Yes." I nodded.
    "I'm Kyle."
    He put his hand out and I took it as we greeted each other. I was probably as pink as cotton candy at a fair, but I couldnt help it.
    So he finally had a name.
    I liked this chapter. It's really short though. :\ After this one, the plot begins to pick up. Last night I was writing some chapters and I kept saying "No, I have to go to sleep!" I just couldnt because I was getting so wraped up in writing.
    Comment asking to be notified for the next chapter if you want to be.
    Feedback would be greatly appreciated, as always.
    I adore my readers.
    <3

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    Shattered Heart
    Chapter Four
    Haley
    I jumped when I heard the front door slam. It was obvious it was my mother arriving home from work.
    "Haley!!" My mothers voice made me cringe. I ran down the stairs to see a furious mother.
    "What is this!?" She snarled pointing to my backpack.
    "It's my backpack. I'm sorry." I pleaded. I watched my mothers hand elevate and fall back down when the phone rang.
    "I never want it in my sight again." My mother growled. When I finally thought I was safe this time she slapped me before walking away to the phone.
    Some would ask me why I haven't told anyone, my answer would be that it just isn't that simple. No one would easily believe you; and when you're an outcast like me it just makes things worse. Talking to a counselor would just be awful. They have to keep things confidential unless I was in danger, and I'm in obvious danger. Once, a counselor saw my cuts and called my mother. My mom found my razor, and cut up my wrists and arms. I wasn't allowed to eat for three days, and was forced to transfer schools.
    I've now learned that hiding things with a smile is a good way to hid everything. I always seems so happy.
    I'm a master at keeping secrets now.
    :\ Boring chapter.
    Comment asking to be notified for the next chapter if you want to be. Sorry for not posting. Maybe another chapter today?
    This will probably be my last story on Witty. Thinking over everything, anyone could steal my stories and take them to another site. I haven't made a decision yet, but I just wanted to warn everyone. Another reason is that no one really reads my stories, so whats the point in posting them you know?
    Feedback would be greatly appreciated, as always.
    I adore my readers.
    <3

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    Shattered Heart
    Chapter Three
    Haley
    I jumped as I felt my fathers cold hands on my shoulders. I felt my heart begin to beat quickly as his lips crept up and down my neck.
    "I have homework." I whispered.
    "Yes, you do. With me." My father snarled.
    "Not now." I breathed.
    "What?" He growled.
    "I said, not now." I repeated.
    "Damn it, Haley! You better listen to me right now. You do as I say when I say!" He screamed.
    I felt myself swallow hard as I prepared to respond. I closed my eyes, then re-opening them.
    "No." I persisted. As much as I wanted to scream I contained myself. As much as I wanted to run, I stayed with my back facing him.
    "I built up the already little courage I had, forcing myself to walk away.
    I fell to the floor with a scream as the pain in my shoulder blades began from where he had just hit me.
    "Go get ready." My father snapped.
    My father being the idiot drunk he was sent me to my room. I watched as he propped himself on the couch, already falling asleep. I smirked at his stupidity as I crept up the stairs, careful not to awake him.
    I walked into my bedroom, locking the door behind me.
    I didn't actually have homework, I just didn't want to please him. Ever. I sat on my bed as my eyes welled up in tears, uncovering my pillow to see my all too familiar razor blade. Pressing it against my wrist, then sliding.
    I felt my shoulders slump down and loosen as I relieved my pain. I winced as I looked in a mirror across from me in my room. How could I do this to myself?
    I wasn't the sweet and innocent little girl I used to be.
    :\ Boring chapter.
    Comment asking to be notified for the next chapter if you want to be.
    Also, you guys dont have a clue what the characters look like. So here are the characters that have already been introduced and will play big parts in this, more will be given throughout the story:
    http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=56356687
    Feedback would be greatly appreciated, as always.
    I seriously love my reader(s). I don't know how many I have, but I love you guys so much.

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    Shattered Heart
    Chapter One
    Haley
    "Okay, good. Well, I just wanted to vent. Well, my life absolutely sucks!! Troy broke up with me and left me for Tiffany! Then my mom grounded me for talking back to her? Psh, she deserved it! I seriously want to kill myself!" Leah complained.
    I felt anger build up in my body. Leah had it so easy. She doesn't have a clue about what I go through everyday. I haven't even told her about my parents. I wanted to yell at her.
    "Oh. I'm sorry. Y-you deserve better than him." I tried my best to wave the urge of exploding on her away.
    "Sorry? Is that all you have to say? Wow, I'm going through a really hard time and you're acting like it's nothing? What a great friend." Leah hung up on me.
    I squeezed onto my phone in frustration. How could she be so self centered? My eyes looked at the pills laying in front of me, my thoughts were interrupted by my mothers shrill voice.
    "Haley! Get down here right now!"
    I jumped up, puting on a long coat and wiping my wrists off while running down the stairs.
    "Why didn't you cook dinner?!" My mother screamed.
    "I'm sorry, I didn't think you asked me too." I replied, scared.
    "Do I have to tell you what to do? Fine, come here." My mother screamed.
    I did as I was told, well aware of what was about to happen. My mother proved me right, backhanding me across the face. My eyes felt like they were going to pop out of my head.
    "Make dinner." My mother advised.
    "Yes ma'-"
    "And while you're at it clean the house." My mother cut me off.
    "Rotten, pathetic, good for nothing child." My mother muttered while walking away.
    Leaving my face, and heart, stinging in pain.
    Woah, this written out on paper is almost two pages. I'm surprised it looks so short. Hope you guys like it!
    Comment asking to be notified for the next chapter if you want to be.
    Feedback would be greatly appreciated, as always.

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    Shattered Heart
    Prologue
    Narrarator
    She drops five more pills into her hand. Swallow them and soon it'll be over. The world will swallow her in a black darkness and she will never have to see the daylight again. Never have to go through more pain, wouldn't it be so much easier? It really would save her the pain of her everyday life that she has to put up with. But will it hurt anyone? Of course not. No one cares about her, so why not just end it right now? It's not like anyone will care.
    She wipes away more tears from her swollen face with her bloody wrists.
    She jumps when her phone next to her rings. She sniffles, dropping the pills, wiping her bloody wrists off as well as she can on her jeans, and clears her throat. When she's physically ready to act like nothing is wrong, and nothing was ever wrong she answers her loudly ringing phone.
    "Hello?" She says in her best happy voice like always.
    "Hey Hal- wait, are you okay?" Her best friend asks her.
    This is no hard task, lying about how she was doing was nothing new to her. She does it all the time, this will be a piece of cake and no one will ever know.
    Except for her.
    "Yeah, I'm great!" She lies while staring at her still bleeding wrists.
    So this is the Prologue. I know, it's really short, but I didn't want to make it as long as the other chapters I have written. I hope you guys like it. (:
    Comment asking for notifications to get them, you will have to comment on every chapter for them.
    I won't do a teaser for this because its just the beginning, but I will on all the other chapters. I'll post chapter one tomorrow.
    Feedback? Please? I really would appreciate it.

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    New Years Luck
    Chapter 23
    "Taylor! Are you almost ready?" Gavin called after me.
    "Yeah!" I yelled across the house while running down the stairs. He and I linked arms and walked out the door.
    We were on our way to watch the ball drop for New Years, today was the one year aniversary of when we met. Gavin kissed the top of my head and he was playing with something in his coat pocket.
    "What ya got?" I asked curiously.
    "Huh? Oh, nothing." He smiled brushing it off. I was suspicious, but I let it go.
    "Want to get some hot chocolate? It's pretty cold." I asked Gavin.
    "Here." He handed me one of his multiple jackets on and put it around me. I smiled at his gesture.
    "Thank you, but I really want hot chocolate." I giggled along with him.
    "Okay, come on." Gavin and I walked over and got our cups of Hot chocolate and then proceeded to walk over to watch the ball drop.
    Gavin and I stood talking about this exact day last year, and all of our memories that we had shared.
    "I love you." We both said at the same time, then kissed shortly after. Gavin pulled away when we heard everyone shouting.
    "5, 4, 3, 2, 1! Happy new year!!" The entire crowd shouted.
    This was the exact day that we had met, and it was the most special day of my life. When I went to turn around and hug Gavin, he was no longer in his standing position. Instead, he was down on the ground, down on one knee, with a blue box open in his hand as he stared at me. I gasped in surprise.
    "Taylor White, will you, take me as your husband? Will you marry me?" Gavin asked.
    "Yes!" I screamed through my tears and hugged him around his neck.
    He and I were in love, we were going to married, we would spend the rest of our lives together. And all it took, was a little bit of
    New years luck
    Sorry for this feeling a bit rushed, it was hard to fit it all in without going above the character limit.
    So what did you guys think of this story? I really liked it.
    I will post the Prologue of my new story Shattered Hearts tomorrow at some point. I really think that you guys will like that one, I know I do.
    If anyone wants to be notified for the Prologue tomorrow, comment saying so.
    I love each and every one of my readers, thank you for sticking by me for this story.

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    New Years Luck
    Chapter 22
    "Happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear Taylor! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!"
    "Thank you guys so much!" I beamed. This may have been the sweetest thing anyone had done for me.
    "Oh don't thank us dear, its not much." Gavin's mother exclaimed.
    "Really though, it means a lot." I explained to them
    "Well, blow out the candles!" Gavin told me.
    I looked over at him smiling as I was about to blow all twenty six candles out.
    "I wish for-"
    "No!!" Gavin exclaimed
    "What?!" I giggled
    "Not out loud!" Gavin explained.
    "Yes sir." I groaned sarcastically.
    I closed my eyes, as any normal person would as I thought of the perfect wish. It hit me hard, and it was perfect.
    I wish for Gavin and I to spend the rest of our lives together
    I blew out the candels, looking over at Gavin as a smirk snuck up my face. I really did love him.
    "Yay!!!" The family cheered. I giggled at their response as Gavin's mother cut the cake.
    "So, what'd you wish for?" Gavin asked
    "Oh, nothing." I bubbled
    "Really, what'd you wish for, a pony?" Gavin retorted
    "No, this was more important than a pony."
    Sorry for a bad chapter and short chapter, its only filling in the space between the next chapter.
    One more chapter left! Are my few readers excited? It should be posted tomorrow. :)
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    Teaser:
    "When I spun around to kiss Gavin, he was no longer standing up, instead he was...."

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    New Years Luck
    Chapter 21
    Taylor's p.o.v.
    When halftime was called at the basketball game Gavin lead me outside to his truck and stood me in front of him to wait. When he came back around he had something in his hands behind his back.
    "Close your eyes."
    "Okay, open." Gavin beamed.
    I opened my eyes and looked at my neck, there was a beautiful sterling silver heart necklace.
    http://www.polyvore.com/gavin_taylor/set?id=55645639
    * * * *
    *August*
    "Taylor, where do you want these boxes?"
    "What are they labeled?"
    "Uh....Clothes."
    "In front of the closet please." I yelled across the house as I stumbled into Gavin's apartment with my boxes. It was probably short notice for us to be living with eachother, after all we had only known each other for eight months, but I really felt something with Gavin.
    "I'll take these. Just put the boxes in front of the stairs, I'll bring them up. Where do you want the Makeup and shoes boxes?"
    "Makeup on the bed, shoes with the clothes." I smiled.
    I left out the door to get the remaining three boxes, and put them on the kitchen counter with the other kitchen supplies. Lucky for the two of us, when Gavin's microwave broke and practically caught fire I was already packing to move in with him. I started hopping up the stairs to begin unpacking my clothes and things, so it was done and out of the way. Something was thrown onto the bed that made me jump.
    "Gavin!!" I giggled.
    "What, I'm tired!" Gavin laughed
    As I looked at Gavin and in that moment I just knew. I knew that he was the one for me, no matter what happened. I knew, that he was
    Who I'd be spending the rest of my life with.
    I lied. There are two chapters left, then that's it. Like I said, no Epilogue. Sorry. Hope you don't hate me.
    Comment to be notified
    I love my readers more than I love Ryan Reynolds shirtless in July. Thats a lot of love. Just saying.
    Teaser:
    "What'd you wish for?"

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    New Years Luck
    Chapter 20.5
    Taylor's p.o.v.
    I felt my face get warm, and my throat get tight. I felt a grin creeping up little by little on my face. I took my keys out of my pocket and dropped them. Pretending not to notice. I watched out of the corner of my eye as Gavin picked them up.
    "I think you dropped your keys." He said.
    "Thank you!" I beamed
    "Hey, anytime you need someone to pick up your keys I'm here for you." I laughed at him, remembering the night we met.
    I put my hand out to him. "I'm Taylor." I introduced.
    He took my hand and shook it. "I'm Gavin. Nice to meet you." He smiled
    "Nice to meet you too." I smiled back
    "No one to share the special moment with?" Gavin asked me.
    "Oh, no. I broke up with him yesterday. What about you?" I asked, keeping conversation going.
    "Naw, I'm here on my own. I wasn't going to miss the ball drop for the first time since living here. You live nearby?" Gavin asked.
    "Oh, yeah. Just a thirty minute walk. What about you?" I asked back.
    "Just about twenty minutes away. You seem new here, where are you from?" Gavin asked.
    "Oh, haha. Just from Ohio. I came here after finishing High School. Have you lived here your entire life?" I asked him.
    "Oh yeah." He said with a New England accent, I giggled at him. He looked into my eyes.
    "3,2,1. Happy New Year." He said, looking deep into my eyes.
    "Touche." I beamed.
    Gavin pulled me close to him, and as his lips brushed mine, I pushed into him, making this kiss even better. I felt his hands moving upward, and quickly they were in my hair. I closed my eyes, enjoying the moment. Because that moment,
    Was the best moment of my life
    Okkayyy, a few important things.
    1. Sorry for this being so short, witty is stupid and wouldn't let me post it all together so I had to split it in half.
    2. I really liked these two chapters, it was nice writing them.
    3. This story is almost over, 5 or 6 chapters left. There will NOT be an Epilogue no matter how much you beg.
    4. I have started a new story, when this one is over I'm going to post the Prologue the next day. The title will probably suck cause I suck with titles...so yeah. I'm really excited about this one, it isn't focused on relationships like this one, it'll be about teen and high school drama and troubles. It is a lot more emotional.
    Thats about it, comment if you want to be notified, love my readers blah blah blah. Yeah, check out that teaser, hope you like it. ;)
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    Teaser:
    "Where do you want these boxes?"

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