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Archie Smith, Boy Wonder
    A tiny voice asked, “Is he the one?” An orb floated to the sleeping boy’s head, and another tiny voice answered,
           “Yes, definitely.”
            “Why him? What makes different from the rest?”
            “Many things. In fact, everything.”
            The voices were omnipotent, not originating from a single point in the room, but they seemed to somehow reflect the thoughts of the orbs.
            “Ready, then?”
            “Absolutely.”
            The room was filled - literally filled to the walls, floor, and ceiling - for a millisecond with a flash of bright, white light. When the light faded, the orbs and the boy had vanished, leaving the bedroom eerily silent and still.

***
            Archie’s eyes slowly fluttered open, revealing his blurred surroundings. His head was throbbing, he was dizzy, and this was not the bed in which he had fallen asleep.

Author's note:
This is inspired by a page from the book The Mysteries of Harris Burdick by Chris Van Allsburg, which is an amazing book of illustrations, each accompanied by one sentence.
I might most more of this... later. Sorry if it's a bit unclear in the beginning, description slipped my mind as I was writing from a picture.

 

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Temptress · 1 decade ago
finally a decent writer oh my god
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