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The Last Dance
Chapter Seventeen...

I turned around to see a much older looking Jon, hands in his Jack Wills sweatshirt. He had dark bags under his pain filled eyes. Ben had now moved closer to me and was tugging on my shirt. "Thats Jon!" Ben said to me. How did Ben know Jon? Why was Jon here? What should I say? "Jon?" I asked, slowly walking to the gate. "Uh... What are you doing here?" He asked. I opened my mouth but nothing came out. "I think I should be asking you that..." He looked shocked. Well why was he walking outside my family's house in Ireland? "Elyssa?!" I heard Annabelle, my other cousin shout. I turned around to see Leo and Annabelle running towards me. "Was this the surprise?" Leo asked as I hugged him. I was about to say yes when he pulled away quickly. "Jon?" Leo asked. Annabelle ran out the gate and hugged Jon. This was getting really weird. I grabbed Leo's arm. "How do you know him!?" I whispered. "He comes by the house a lot. He's a good friend of ours." I turned to look at Jon, who was talking to Annabelle, who was laughing. "Oh my! Come inside, It's getting cold out." My grandmother said, almost pulling me inside. "I turned around and got one last look at Jon who was walking away. I still didn't know why he was visiting my family in Ireland.

"Jon...I love you." I whispered.

 

 

Sorry its so short!!! well ill write morre soon!

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luv2flip910 · 1 decade ago
please write more super soon!!!!!!!! i didnt get notifyed for this chapter which makes me sad but i love it!!!!!
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