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Who Knew..
(A Love Story) 

Chapter 14part 3

The girls weren't smiling anymore. They knew my father pushed me hard but never thought it'd be like this.

He walked over to me as I sat on the mat.

"Why aren't you perfecting it. I put alot of work into teaching you this. You know this!" He shouted.

"No. I use to know this, as in 3 years ago! Why would you make me do this routine when you knew I broke my ankle." I replied angrily.

"I don't care! Your doing it until you get it right. Maybe your hair needs to be up." He grabbed my arm and pulled me up.

"Again!" he shouted.

I walked over to the start and hunched over with my arms on my legs trying to catch my breath leaving my hair down.

I did it for the fourth time and messed it up. I knew what was coming. Again again again. I spent an hour doing the same move. Hitting my stomache and back everytime.

"Do you want to be here all night ladies?" He shouted to the other girls.

"No." They replied.

"Well looks like you are since Ms. Allison can't get her head on straight." He replied laughing.

Why was he doing this?

 

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I think I am going to post videos from youtube of the moves that I talk about instead of trying to explain. It will make it easier for you all to understand (:

A big thanks to AmberBailey for helping me with Ideas! Thank you! <3

Also check out her 1D fan fic! Its amazing (:

Vault video, Gabby Douglas, olympics: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-aKYy4rRiLQ

Outfits; http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=55581612

http://www.polyvore.com/chapter_14_ally/set?id=55523112

 

 

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iluhyoux · 1 decade ago
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flossydossy · 1 decade ago
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