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Cutting Into Love
~Prolouge~
"Noah!" I screamed, my eyes filling up with tears. He laid on top of me, his hands moving everywhere rappidly. He had that famous smirk of his on his face and his bright blue eyes looking down at me mercilessly.
"Stop ticking me!"
"Not until you say it." I bit my bottom lip and shook my head. His hands began to work their way around again.
"Okay, okay!" I laughed, breathless.
He rose one eyebrow, threatening to tickle me again.  "You're the funniest guy I've ever met and your jokes aren't terrible." A grin appeared on his face. 
"Better," he nodded. I rolled my eyes.
"Can you get off of me now?" He stood up and helped me up with him. I brushed the dirt and grass of my clothes while he handed me my jacket.
"Today was fun," Noah smiled. I gave a light smile and began to walk off. 
"Wait," he called out. I turned to face him. "Do you want to hang out again sometime? Maybe the movies or something?" he asked. I stared down at my feet and then looked up at him. His eyes were so mesmerizing, I'm surprised I didn't get lost in them.
"I, uh...I can't," I lied while scratching my head nonchalantly.
"Are you sure?" he questioned again, looking down with his hands in his pockets. "'Cause I kinda wanted to--" He stopped. I noticed he was glaring at my wrist. Oh, great, I thought. He sees the scars. Why did I take off the jacket? I'm so stupid.
He took my arm and traced them with his finger.
"Noah, I-"
"Hallie, it's okay."
"No, it's not," I retorted. "You see them, you'll think I'm screwed up, and then you'll leave, like everyone else does. It always happens." He stared at me for a minute until I felt lips softly brush up against mine.
A whole zoo was forming in my stomach and I felt myself blushing about 20 shades of red.
He pulled away, our foreheads touching.
"I'm gonna make a promise to you," he whispered.
Promise. That word has been said to me so many times, yet it means nothing to me anymore.
"I promise...that I'll never leave you."
 
Awh. c: 
You see how I made the title all fancy? Hehe, I'm techy.
Okie doke, so I know this is terrible and you're probably thinking "Blech, what is this?" It's my first time writing, and it sucks, so no need to rub it in. I just wanted to see if it was good or not, and if I should keep writing, so shoot me a comment? I really want to continue, but it's up to you guys!(:
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Cutting Into Love ~Prolouge~ "Noah!" I screamed, my

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marebearj · 1 decade ago
omg it is sooo good! reminder?(:
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KatieGrace · 1 decade ago
this is extremely good!
do me a favor? keep writing<3
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youdontknowme97 · 1 decade ago
its good :) you should continue writing it!
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