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The Final Cry
 Jordyn's POV
Chapter 6.

"I swear she'll be here! Jess has never missed one of our Friday night girls nights." I told my other best friends Julia, Jackie, and Lilly.   
"Well, she hasn't exactly been keeping her promises lately has she?" Jackie announced directing her sentance at Lilly
"Nope. I still can't believe she stood me up yesterday when we were supposed to go dress shopping for my very first date!" Lilly added
Julia nodded in agreement. "and she could have at least called before deciding not to show up to my house for our tutoring session! Without her, how am I ever going to pass summer school?"
"Guys, really?" I said. "You know she just got dumped by Jayson. She must be taking it pretty hard." I was obviously the only one still on our best friends side.
"They broke up over a week ago!" said Jackie, the boy crazy one in our group. She could get over a boy in a few hours, as soon as she saw a new hottie walk by. "Stop making excuses for her Jord. She's obviously changed. She thinks she's too good for us or something."
"You should know Jordyn," snapped Julia, obviously getting frusterated with me. "I mean, she missed our tutoring session on Wednesday, stood up Lilly with her dress picking yesterday, and ditched all of us today. But that's nothing compared to what she did to you."

"Please don't talk about that." I whispered more to myself than to them.
   "You can't ignore it forever. She missed your birthday party! Your 15th birthday that you've been planning since February." hissed Lilly.
I stood silently for a while and prayed they didn't see the tear trickle down my cheek. I still couldn't believe Jess missed one of the most important things in my life. 
The rest of the group was obviously done with talking to me about her. "If you still want to defend Jess after what she's done to you, that's your choice. But we're done with her. So it's us or her" Julia demanded.
Lilly and Jackie nodded in agreement.
The bad memories of my best-friendless birthday party must have taken over because suddenly, I couldn't remember anything good about Jessica at all; only that she ditched us way to many times and I was sick of it.
"Let's go guys." I said. "She obviously isn't who I thought she was." and with that I walked into the food court. The others smirked and followed.
And that day was the last day I ever thought twice about Jess.



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JustWaiting · 1 decade ago
thanks Randi. i try ;)
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randi* · 1 decade ago
great job swann:)
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fiesty1 · 1 decade ago
really good!!!
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