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FREE FALLING

CHAPTER SIX
- H o l l y ' s  P o i n t  o f  V i e w -

 I could hear Hannah’s feet dragging behind me in the sand, but i didn’t bother waiting for her to keep up. From the looks of it, there were six people playing volleyball in the sand, three boys and three girls.
I kept my eyes locked on one boy as my feet skidded through the sand. He had bleach blonde hair, short, but long enough to still be messed up, somehow still looking perfect even when it was sticking in all directions. He was tan, maybe even tanner than me, and was wearing nothing but black and white swim trunks, showcasing his perfect six pack.
When i finally made it to the cluster of teens, reluctantly waiting for Hannah to catch up so i could introduce her to the group, they all looked over at me, studying me carefully like they had never seen a stranger before in their lives. I assumed that they hadn’t.
Five of them were playing volleyball, two boys on a team against two girls and a boy, while one of the girls sat in the sand, watching them.
All of them were looking at me still, something i didn’t mind much since i had grown used to it, and loved the attention. When Hannah approached us i opened my mouth to talk, twisting my hair around my long blonde hair for effect.
“hey, guys, i’m Holly and this is my twin sister Hannah, we’re kind of new and we will be staying here for the summer, so we just wanted to come meet some neighbors,” i smiled brightly, glancing back at the blonde boy.
A boy with short brown hair and tan answered me, gazing at me with chocolate brown eyes. “I’m Logan,” he smiled back, gesturing to himself. “This is Cole,” he explained, pointing to his volleyball partner, the blonde one. “that’s Harper,” he pointed to a bubbly redhead with a million freckles crowding her face, then a pale, dark haired girl who he called Jane, and a boy next to her with shaggy brown hair and pale, freckled skin, named Richard. “and that’s Allie,” he told me, pointing out the girl sitting on the sidelines with short, blonde hair and piercing blue eyes.
“hi guys,” Hannah smiled, waving. i just nodded, absentmindedly kicking my feet in the ground until my sandals were filled with small grains of sand.
“umm.. do you guys want to join our game?” Cole offered, looking at Hannah, then me, with a quizzical expression. i caught Hannah peeking over at Logan, the one that had introduced me to everyone, while he served the yellow and white striped ball over the net and on to the other side, gaining a point for his team.
“sure, i’ll play,” i grinned, eager to show off my volleyball skills, since i had been the captain of the varsity volleyball team at my school three years running.
“nah, i’m fine,” Hannah replied shyly, probably embarrassed at her lack of athleticism. i joined Cole and Logan’s team, evening out the sides so they each had three players. Hannah sat down next to Allie in the sand, making easy conversation.
I could feel Cole watching me as i hit the ball over the net, falling to the ground before the other team even had time to react. Cole whistled behind me, and i wasn’t sure if it was for my playing or my looks, but either way made me happy.
Maybe getting a new boyfriend here wouldn’t be that hard, after all.

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you_onlyLIVonce · 1 decade ago
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