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FREE FALLING

CHAPTER FOUR
- H o l l y ' s  P o i n t  o f  V i e w -

 “woah,” i felt Hannah’s hot breath on the back of my neck, both of us standing in the doorway of our beach house, breathtaken by what we found inside. My bright blue eyes widened as they scanned the front entryway, flip flops clacking on the granite tile flooring as i walked across the room, examining every inch of my summer.
In short, the house was gorgeous. Four stories was more than enough to host an amazing party, and the ocean view was almost too much to handle. I estimated about a half mile of beachfront spanning across our backyard, perfectly viewed from almost any place in the house. From the outside, the house was built to look like a spanish mansion with stucco paint on all sides and spanish tiling on the roof.
I struggled with carrying my suitcases up the spiral staircase leading to our rooms, upstairs. Two seemingly identical bedrooms took up most of the hallway, directly across from eachother. I chose the one on the left, setting my bags on the already-made bed, white comforter tightly tucked under the mattress. Opening the blinds, i had a sideways view of the beach, not able to see our property but instead facing miles of sand and water off in the distance.
The sun was just starting to set, coloring the sky beautiful shades of pink and orange. I watched for a moment, hearing Hannah climb up the stairs, letting all of today sink in. Realizing that i still had some time to waste before i would be able to fall asleep, i started unpacking, pulling clothes out of my bag and stuffing them into the new eight-drawer dresser situated in the corner of my room.
After a while i found my phone, hidden in a pile of t shirts, and turned it on, listening to the familiar sound it made as it powered up. Almost instantly it vibrated, again and again, probably about ten times before it finally stopped and i was able to pick it up, checking my messages.
A few invitations to end of the year parties that i would have to decline, a few messages from friends asking about the new house & how i liked it in the small town of North Beach, population 27o, and one message that stuck out.

i dont think this long distance thing is gonna work out. were over -ben

My breath caught in my throat as i read the message twice, three times, until i had it memorized, making sure i had read it right. This had to be a joke. There was no way that Ben, my boyfriend of four months, would break up with me. Especially not over text.
I collapsed onto my bed, hands shaking violently.
i could feel tears jerking my eyes, begging to fall, but i wouldn’t let them. i wasn’t going to let other people hurt me anymore. Starting tonight, i had a new summer mission. It didn’t matter how many parties i went to, how many girls were begging to be my friend, how many trends i set, or how tan i became.
All that mattered was getting back at Ben, no matter what it took. I would find someone to take his place and make him sorry he ever messed with me.

so, i pictured the house kind of looking like this: http://www.spanish-home-plan.com/images/header.jpg (: hope you likeee the story. feel free to give me any suggesstions you have. i'm open to new ideas ♥ my goal is 150 followers by my birthday on July 27th. hoping you can make that happenn? you should also follow me on instagram (sydneeyk98) yay love you.
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