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Fatal Crashes
                           ©bruhihavefeelingstoo
                           Chapter 2

   I was ready for my one & only sweet 16. Finally the day I'd been waiting for, ever since I was like 5.
       
      Now, It was time to go pick up Madeline. Everything was going as planned & it was going to turn out good.
          As I was on the way to Madelines house, by myself, When Jonah popped into my mind again. Jeez. Why cant i get him off my freakin' mind. 
    I groaned to no one impeticular. & there I was, In Madelines driveway. I saw Josh, her brother standing at the door, calling Madeline. He looked pretty dressed up maybe he was coming too. After all, I had invited him.
     Madeline walked out, & Wow, she looked gorgeous. Her curly red hair, had been straightened pencial straight. 
      As I had expected, Josh & Madeline both got in the car. Madeline in the front & Josh, in the back seat. I didnt car that Josh went, I was actually excited, I mean, he wasnt ugly. If you know what I mean. 
       "Wow, Kendal, you look...Amazing!" Madeline told me.
     "So do you, but thanks! I'm so excited!!!" I said enthusiasticly. 
    "Oh, & Josh, You clean up nice yourself" I looked back & Josh, & as I said that he blushed. He was one year older than Madeline & I, & I have had a teeny crush on him since like forever. 
         I had my GPS installed in my car cause I had noooo idea how to get to this "country club" 45 minutes away.
The "lady" told me to get on Hwy 65 & take a sharp left and 2 rights & the switch to Hwy 70 & take 4 lefts & 2 rights on Howard St. & I was Frazzled. We tried remembering everything the 'lady said'  & we ended up in some town called Biscuit. 
      I stopped in the middle of the road to look at my map, & found the way, & Then, & there is when it happened.
I looked up & a bright red mustang going about 80 mph was coming straight towards my black BMW. I swerved out of the way, but it was to late. The mustang hit me head on. My car flipped & flipped & finally landed right side up. 
       I was in bad pain. Everything hurt, from head to neck, to back, to legs, to toes. I tried turning around to take a look at Josh & Madeline but It was no use. My neck hurt way to much. 
   "Jo-osh? M-Madeline?" I whimpered.
I pleaded for someone to answer. For someone to drive by & call an ambulance. I longed for my mom & dad...or just somebody.
    There was still no answer from the back seat or beside me. I stayed perfectly still just in case anything was broken.
        Finally a large white car came by. It slammed on it brakes beside my totaled BMW. A maybe 20-25 year old guy, really hansome stepped out & ran to my car. 
My window was down so, he could easily get to me. 
Soon, I felt a warm liquid running down my face. Great. Im bleeding.
      "Honey, Im calling an ambulance. Everythings gonna be alright." The man told me.
  I looked at him greatfully. He was my lifesaver. If he wasnt here, we'd probably be dead soon.
  "Thank you. thank you. thank you" I cried. Tears were running down my face by then & the man was on the phone with 911. 
    Again he reasurred me that everything was gonna be ok, & we were all gonna live. The ambulances got there, & by then, the pain was killing me in my upper back & neck. & my legs. I had to of broke something. 
 & this was how I spent my 16th birthday.
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