chapter one
"So it'll be 15$ per hour; correct?" my
neighbor said to me as he bagan to leave through the front door.
I felt as if I was a drug dealer. The way Mr. Bluos was asking me
my hourly rate and telling me how much he was willing to give to
me.
"I mean, I really can give you more, if you
would like. Babysitters nowadays are paid twenty to twenty-five
dollars per hour. I feel like I'm cheaping you out because of
only paying you fifteen dollars. I'll only be gone for about
4 hours. That's not a fair deal. Please, let me pay you
more!" Mr. Bluos kept pushing to give me more money.
"Mr. Bluos, seriously, I'm okay with the
fifteen dollars! Please, just go on your date, and I'll watch
your children," I said in an annoyed tone.
"Alright, alright! Fine! I'll see you
around eleven," Mr. Dubose inched his way out the door,
saying over and over again, "Bye girls!". I closed the
glossy, oak doors and locked them behind me. The girls I were
babysitting were hyper. Hyper. Hyper. Hyper. Everyday I had to
babysit, my night consisted of prying the children off of
expensive armoires, taking hands out of the cookie jars, and much
more.
I often though the children hated me from the way
the acted around me. As soon as I sat down at their large dining
room table, they took the chair's back into their nabby
little hands and pulled the chair out from under me. My butt
hitting the floor made a solid thump sound that rumbled through
the house. Its not that I'm fat or anything. Its just such a
big house.
"Alright girls," I finally stood up for
myself against the 6 year olds, "I am certainly not playing
these games tonight! I have an important biology test in the
morning and I don't need to be CONSTANTLY watching you little
brats! So you are going to sit your little rumps on that nice,
comfy sofa and watch looney toones or whatever you watch! NOW
GO!!" I found myself breathing heavily from my sudden
outburst.
The girls, instead of reprimanding my yelling, sat
down on the sofa like they were told without any other sounds or
comments.
Now was the time for studying. I have always
hated studying, especially studying for a bio test. But as soon
as I opened my book, the girls began complaining: "We're
tired!" "Take us to bed" "Tuck us in!"
Blah Blah Blah. I decided this could benefit me with my studies.
So I took the three up the foyer stairs into their rooms. After
tucking them in, I began to walk back downstairs but a set of
folding attic steps caught my eye.
I decided to check out what they had in the attic;
antiques, paintings, etcetra. The steps were creaky and wobbly. I
swear I saw a three black bats hanging on the risers. I ignored
them and ventured forward. All that was up there were old
Tupperware containers full of old clothes. When I opened a rather
small container, I stepped on a 4"x6" inch piece of
paper. I picked it up. It was a picture...
A picture of... Mr. Bluos. It looked rather old. He
was on a small farm holding a rusty, metal pitchfork. On his head
was a very old looking, western style straw hat. There wasn't
a date on the front of the sepia colored photo so I looked on the
back. When I flipped it over, what I saw made me drop the picture
in such surprise.. On the back, in small print, it said:
"August 1846"
Authors Note
Hey guys. I know this isn't written very well. TRUST ME. I am
a much better writer. But basically this is a story for my Witty.
I love to write. So this story will have many chapters and they
will come out once a week. (When and if I can) Please read the
rest when they come out and give me comments and feedback in the
comments. But the next chapters will be longer and much better
quality in writing style. I have just been planning this story
for a while and wanted the first chapter to come out. Well,
please, wait for chapter 2 coming next weekend!
- HipsterGraceffa
4 faves · 1 comments · Jun 8, 2012 8:31pm
ashlyn* · 1 decade ago
HOLY CRAP.
you say this isn't written well?
IT IS.
WRITE MORE.
DO IT.
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