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 Torn Two

Chapter 1
"Attempting?" I croaked, utterly confused.
                "Well, I guess for all intents and purposes, you were dead for about two minutes, but I brought you back.  I'm Samuel Standom by the way, Doctor Samuel Standom,"
                "What?" I asked completely confused.  I looked around for the first time and then realized that I wasn't in the hospital anymore.  I was in what looked like the main room of a large mansion.  There was a window opposite the couch I was lying on, and it showed that it was very early in the morning.  There were weak rays of sunshine coming through the blinds.
                "You were dead, officially committed suicide.  But I unofficially brought you back and brought you to my house.  I figured you wanted to start over, you may not want your adoring fans to know that you failed to commit suicide.  Wanted you to go out in a blaze of passion.  So no one but my family know that you are alive."
                At first his rant was a little creepy, images of kidnappers and stalkers ran through my mind, but then I realized that he was just trying to help me, might as well let him. 
                "Thank you," I rasped.
                "Here," he said, lifting me up into a sitting position on the couch, "let me introduce you to your new family, and then I will have one of them show you to your room."
                As if on cue, seven people strode into the room.  Samuel started gesturing to them one by one, giving me their name.  He pointed to the biggest son, who had large rippling muscles, he looked about twenty "This is my son Caleb."
                Next he pointed out a slender blonde woman by his side.  She looked haughty, but curious, probably around twenty as well "This is his wife, Emily."
                After that, he gestured to a petite black haired girl who was about my height but looked like she was around 25.  Her eyes sparkled with contained enthusiasm as she bounced up and down on the balls of her feet.   "This is my daughter Allysin"
                Then he indicated a tall, blonde male with brow sweeping bangs.  He looked self-contained and mysterious, around 25 as well, "This is her husband, Ethan."
                He pointed to a stocky man with dirty blonde hair around 20 ish as well, who pulled a half smile and nodded his head to acknowledge me, "This is my other son, Wes."
                Then he got to a kind looking girl with a curtain of mahogany hair that was down to the small of her back, "This is his wife, Ellie."
                Finally he put his arm around a tall beauty with flaming red hair and a smile that lit up her green eyes, "And this is my wife, Stacey."
                I smiled at each of them as they were introduced, too bound up in casts and IVs and monitors to do much else.  After a minute I realized they were all waiting on me for something, so I introduced myself. "Uhm," I whispered hoarsly, "Hi, I'm Haylee-"

Ethan cut me off there, "We obviously know who you are, it's not like we live under a rock or anything, we're just immortals."
 

Sorry, I promise this is the last big twist in the storyline for a while, but it just had to be done :) I'm going out of town all weekend so there won't be a new chapter until monday afternoon.

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Torn Two Chapter 1 "Attempting?" I croaked, utterly

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this is amazing...get this published please(: was not expecting any of that
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chubbybunny20 · 1 decade ago
this is soo good!
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dancer98 · 1 decade ago
can you notify moi??
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