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Another Place, Another Time
Chapter 11 Part 1
I hadn't noticed that i had my eyes shut until I heard that voice. Arrogant and with an annoyingly attractive face. Patrick. What the heck am I suppose to do now?!
I looked around. I had a pretty good view since patrick was carrying me, AGAIN like a sack of potatoes.
Now every one was paying attention. Of course not when i was being kidnapped. Sigh, its always me.
The once cute guy was now on the ground curled up in pain. As if he knew I was watchikng him at that moment, he turned around and glared at me, mouthing 'I'll get you for that."
"Come o, lets go sweetheart. Its time.", that same player voice. He carried me out the door. He sat down on the ground the moment i felt the cold breeze on my face. "If you freeze, its your own fault." He began walking in the opposite direction in which we cam efrom. I didn't know where we were going but he saved my life and well, yea, he's my best option.
Into the nioght we went. The sun was just coming up when we finally went into this building. Not just any building, it was a huge mansion. Not to mention simply beautiful.
"Stop gawking and come in.", he reprimended me (am I using this word correctly?) as I stood there in the pouring rain. 'When did it start rainng?!" I hurried inside carful not to slip. But guess what, I did.
I landed flat on my back, Patrick, my mistake, the thing just stared at me. Then suddenly bursted out into luaghter. I glared evilly at my cruel captor.
"Patrick! Is this how you treat a lady? Help her this instant." I turned around to see a upperclass lady. Though she was wearing what I assumed was her pjs, I could tell from the way she held herself. She even yelled at that thing without making looking like a crazy woman.
I felt my face flushed with embarrassment. Apparently the thing didn't notice and stoood there like a little boy who just got scolded at. He sheepishly held out his hand to me. I smirkedd, thinking 'that's what you get.'
I stood up, but this time I slipped forward falling face first....

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