Bipolar Lovestory
Chapter 1
i sat
in my moms car and listened to the radio. "sofia
we'll be there soon and you'll have to help unload
everything". i looked out the window ignoring my mom. i
had given the whole family the silent treatment for a week and i
wasnt going to stop anytime soon. i sat there thinking about my
friends and how i had never gotten to say goodbye to them. i
thought about my house. my REAL home and how i would miss
it. as i sat there thinking about the life i was being
forced to forget sadness overwhelmed me. suddenly the car
stopped. we were here. my mom spoke up interruppting my
thoughts "sofia there are nice boys that live right
next door they have been helping us unpack maybe
you could new make friends in this town and start
over". i rolled my eyes knowing that the only one who
needed to start over waz her. i got out to unload my
step dads truck which was parked behind us. i
climbed up on the tailgate to see the property all at once. we
were parked behind green house which i assumed was supposed to
be ours, right next to it waz a blue house on the other
side towards the front waz another blue house. all of the
houses were connected by sidewalks so they were easy to see.
there waz one other sidewalk that connected to mine but i couldnt
see were it went because of trees. i waz still looking at
everything when somthing grabbed my leg. acting on instinct
i flipped backwards off the truck and kicked whatever it waz
in the head. i looked down to see a boy on the ground who looked
about my age stunned from the kick in the head. "dude that
waz soo kewl!" he said jumping up. i stared at him confused
"guys did u see that? it waz so kewl!" suddenly two
older boys came from around the other side of the truck and stood
next to him. the youngest one had dark skin and a buzz cut
he looked to be about twelve, the same age as me at the time, i
could see he had a big red mark on his left cheek from my kicking
him but he waz giving me this wierd look like i waz pretty
or something. the second boy who looked to be older than the
other two seemed extremely odd with glasses, dark curly
hair almost down to his shoulders, and dressed in all black. i
absently wondered if he realized it waz texas
in late august and wouldnt get cold until about
late november. the last boy waz the one i paid the most attention
to he had a light tan with brown hair he had a pair of
shorts on and a tshirt but what i noticed that was most
important-- he was REALLY cute. the little one spoke up
first and said "guys did u see that! she's a
ninja! shes even cooler than bryce!" at this the
cute one looked up. "sofia!" my mom
yelled, "come help me with this?" i brushed past
the boys to go help my mom. i started putting the last
boxes in the rooms they were supposed to go. i was
putting one in my new room when the boys came in again "is
this your room?" the oldest one asked. i nodded. "i
told you she waz sofia!" the little one said. he looked
at me "im dakota and this is chris" he said
pointing towards the big one. "where's the other
one?" i said. "josh? he'll be back
later." chris said. "hey by the way nice jump
earlier" "thanks i guess" i said.
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when everything was unpacked dakota and
josh offered to give me a tour of the property. after they
showed me everything inluding josh's house behind the trees i
tried to absorb everything they had showed me. it was dark out so
i couldnt really see anything and was completely lost. "any
questions?" dakota asked me. "um why is it so
big?" i said. he laughed and explained to me that it used to
be an old rehab center back in the day but it went out of
business and they were turned into houses.
exhuasted they took me back to my house so i could
sleep. dakota said bye and went home (which turned out to be
the house next to mine) and i waz left standing with
josh. "well goodnight" i said turning to
open my door. suddenly he grabbed my arm and whisper in my ear
"you are protected" and then he waz gone. figuring
i misheard him i went into my room and passed
out.
ok so anything u guys think would
help my writing PLEASE comment i would really appreaciate
it! and im srry it took so long for me to get the chapter out!!!
it wont happen again!!! thnx for reading! love
always!:)
3 faves · 2 comments · Dec 30, 2011 12:30am
VickiDrake
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1 decade ago
Ivy love, grammar and spelling check exists for a reason!! Love you, but the mistakes are driving me insane!!!
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IvyRoxx · 1 decade ago
ill try but im not that good at grammar
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