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Imperfection is Perfection
Chapter 1


"I'm coming Mom, hold on a second!" I screamed from upstairs as I was getting ready for school. My mom was always yelling at me to hurry up in the mornings. But who could blame me, I had to look perfect. I live in a town where knock-off's are completely unacceptable and looked down on, and the only clothes that are worn are designer brands that cost at least 300$ per shirt. Plus, I had a reputation to contain. I am known as the rich, popular, barbie. It's a coincidence that my name is Barbara and I have blonde hair, I'm tan, and I have big boobs. Even my friends call me Barbie; it's who I am.
I ran down the stairs, and out the door to the Cadillac where my mom was waiting for me. "What took you so long?!" My mom yelled at me. "Sorry! I couldn't decide what lip gloss to wear..." I said, with a sarcastic yet truthful tone. School was right around the corner though, so I would leave my house right before the first bell. "By Mommy, love you!" I screamed as I shut the door. "Wait, Barbara!" she said as she rolled down the car window. "You have a doctors appointment after school at 3, don't forget!" Crap, that's right. I forgot about it! I have been feeling such sharp pains deep in my rib cage, so Mom said I should get it checked out. I've been worried about it, because I have no idea what it could possibly be.
As I walk into school, people swarm me. What can I say, I'm popular. And loving it. School passed quickly, and the doctors appointment was all I could think about. We drove out of the school driveway, and hopped of the highway. Soon, I was leading my mom into the waiting room. "Stop moving, you're shaking the chairs." Mom said as I was viciously shaking my legs nervously. "Barbara?" The doctor called out to the waiting room. I got up, and followed the doctor to the room. "Have a seat, Dr. Blake will be with you soon." She said to me. I sat down in a comfy chair, awaiting for the doctor. Not surprisingly, my legs began to shake again. About five minutes later, I saw the door handle turn, and the door opened wide. "Hello there, Barbara! How are we doing today?" Said Dr. Blake. "Great, I guess. Thanks." I said, my voice quivering a little bit. "So, what seems to be the problem?" She said to me while typing into her little laptop. I then explained all of my symptoms, feelings, ect. to her. "Okay, let's take a quick X-Ray, and we will see what the problem is here." I hopped off the table, and went into the X-Ray room. It was dark and scary, I have to admit. She instructed me to lie down on the table, and so I did. She put a heavy blanket/apron over my legs, then walked into a mini room to push the button that'd take the X-Ray. "Allright, all done." She said to me as she took off the apron. I followed her out of the room, and back into her office. I sat in a little chair that was facing her desk. She was doing some more work on her laptop, and I figured it was her pulling up the X-Ray. When I heard a little 'bleep', she said "Ah, here it is." A knot formed in my stomach and my palms of my hands started to sweat. I look up at her face, and her eyes are glued to the screen. She keeps staring, and says slowly, "Oh no..."


Hey, Wittians! Okay so this is my first story, sorry it's a little weak :/. I have no idea what you thought of this, so feedback is recommendedddd!(: Please fav if you've read this/liked it, because I'd like to know if it's worth continuing. Thanks! :*

 

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