PERFECT
MURDER
PART 1
'Code 3, morder on road A - 30 to Dallas." A steped on
the break, turned around and turned on the siren. A lot of
people wouldn't like the word 'murder', but to me,
it was something ordinary. It was my job.
I'm Alecia May. Al, Allie, May ... For many, I'm
perfectly normal 28 year -old, without a family who lives on a
remote farm in the heart of the U.S. state of Texas. My life
would be quite miserable if I wouldn't have my job. I'm
a criminal investigator and a forensic. It's interesting to
work here. It's like every day I'm given a puzzle. All
pieces must match, if not, image will not be complete.
I arrived at the murder scene and iget out of the car. There,
Ray was waiting for me, my colleague and friend. "What do
we have?" I asked. "A woman about 25 years, strangled
and thrown into a ditch. She has a broken leg and ribs, the
rest we'll have a look." I stepped to the edge of the
road and looked down. On the granite paved ditch, lying
motionless was a young woman dressed in a short purple skirt. .
With gloves on, I examined her hand: "Or the devil."
I showed him alittle dot on her elbow. "Drugs?" asked
Ray. I nodded. In her hand I saw a tiny piece of paper. With
tweezers, I took it out and stretched it, "Jack Bell, 34th
Street Kensington" "It looks like an address,"
said my colleague. I got up and said: "Well, let's
go."
"Jack!" I said while opening door. Ray stood behind
me and covered me . I walked two steps forward. "Jack, we
know you're here!" Around the corner came a tiny girl.
After judging the appearance she was Japanese. "Is Jack
here?" I asked. She looked at me blankly. "Do you
speak English?" The question remained unanswered, as i
would speak Russian. "Send me a translator guy," I
said. With my hands, I signaled her to wait. I went into the
room and sit down. After a long wait for 10 minutes, Bem, the
translator guy has appeared at the door . "Yes,
finally," I muttered. "Ask her what's her name
and who is she?" He asked her and she answered. "Her
name is Vanessa and she's living here." "Do you
know Jack Bell?" I asked. "He's her
roommate" "Where is he?" "She says he went
to work." "Where?" "Car repair Bell."
"Thanks," I thanked her and walked up the stairs.
"Boy, people really need to learn English. If you live in
Dallas, it would be good to at least learn a little bit of
English," I was angry. "So what, big deal. It's
not her fault." I rolled my eyes. I was very strict woman,
without understanding to the other. Impatient, maybe.
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This is part 1. I hope you like it. And I'm sorry for the
spelling mistakes, I don't speak english as my first
language. Comment please, and let me know if you like it.
Thankyou. If you comment, I'll probably follow you
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3 faves · 2 comments · Dec 18, 2011 9:36am
brittwzhere
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1 decade ago
This is really good.
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stillwaitingforyou · 1 decade ago
this was great! keep writign!!
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