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OKAY I NEED HELP

im writing a song and i need help with some words to go into the chorus of it or in other words "the main words of the song"
ok it goes:

Baby can you stay awake some more....
I feel like there'll be nothin' else thats warm....
(heres where i need help, should it be this:)
baby can you make it through the day?
and make it feel okay.
(or this:)
baby i can feel you slip away...
and i need you to stay.

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