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The end: part one



I’d never been so scared. Every muscle in my body was tensed. I was running so fast my feet barely touched the ground. I could feel the adrenaline pumping through my body. The only thing that mattered was getting away from her.
My brother, Seth, was running along side me. I could tell he was scared too. This may be because we’re twins, but I could always tell what he was feeling.Then again, maybe I just knew him well enough.
It was then that I toke in my surroundings. Usually my mind doesn’t work properly when I'm running. This time it did. A little more than I expected, too. I was running down an upstairs hallway in what seemed to be a very old mansion. There was cobwebs everywhere and wallpaper from probably the early 1900s. Also, there was paintings of people everywhere. One similarity connected them all - all the people in the paintings had bright green eyes, exactly like mine.

I had just realized something. This house reminded me of the spooky houses you hear about in ghost stories. The cobwebs, dust, and strange paintings were all aspects of a haunted house. All the ghost stories I’ve heard start with some kids entering a haunted house, and end with the kids never coming out. I really hoped this wouldn’t be like that. All of a sudden, the stairs came into view. There must be a door at the bottom of them (or at least a back door)! We were so close to being free.
I looked back at the woman chasing us. She had grayish-brown hair that was matted into knots and tangles. She had few wrinkles, which was surprising to me. She walked odd, as if she had a limp. However, I don’t see how she could have been walking. We were running, and she was keeping up with us fine. She also had red eyes. Blood red eyes. However, the thing that scared me the most was the knife she had in her hand.
“Seth,” I whispered, “Go down the stairs, I think there might be a back door down there.”
“Okay I was thinking the same thing,” he whispered back.
We both dashed down the stairs. I was going two steps at a time. I saw it! The door! I was right! The door out was right near the bottom of the stairs. I got to the bottom and reached for the knob.
It was locked! Of course it was locked. I twisted and turned it, but the door must have been bolted shut on the outside. I had a feeling I knew who did it too.
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The end: part one I’d never been so scared. Every muscle

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