I Lost Everythingchapter 1

December 12, 2011
She wasn't always quiet. She was amazing... After you got to know her, of course. But to everyone except me, she was quiet, dull, and boring. To me she was the opposite. She was always smiling to me, and telling me everything. We were best friends. Of course, me being a boy... I started to fall for her. But that didn't matter to her. She only wanted to be best friends until I was all she had.

December 9th, 2010
It was the Winter of 9th grade, and I was hanging out late at her house. Her mother(An amazing cook) was making turnkey. It smelled wonderful. Her dad was fixing the T.V.. And her sisters were playing in the living room. Everything was going perfect. She looked amazing. Her dark brown hair was tied back, and she was smiling everytime she looked at me.

"Lecia?" I asked her, as I pulled her into her room. Her parents never minded that I did that, because they knew we were just friends, and for now that's all we'd ever be. "Connor?" She said back. I laughed. I loved it when she said my name. She walked me out onto her balcony. It wasn't really a balcony considering she had a room on the bottom floor, but it was more of a porch that we liked to sit on and talk. So, as she walked me out there she held my hand in hers, and I felt important.

"Connor-" She began to say something, but then she pushed me out of the way and in a hurry she ran out of her room. "Lecia!?" I yelled after her. I ran back into her room, and smelled what she must have smelt. Smoke. I quickly felt the handle on her door, made sure it wasn't too hot, and ran out into the hall. There was smoke everywhere.

I kept screaming her name. I flew into every room, looking for her. I didn't care about my own safety. I only wanted her to be safe. Finally I reached the basement. I heard her screaming for me in a gasping voice. "Lecia!!!" I screamed, flying down the stairs. I saw her cowering in a corner. She extended her arms out and I grabbed it and threw  her onto my back.

We started towards the front door, smoke coming at my face. "What about my family!?" She kept screaming. I tried to explain to her that I needed her to ve safe first. She didn't agree. She told me that if they died she'd have no reason to live. I talked her out of that theory and finally found the front door.

I flung the door open as fast as I could and threw her onto the ground. I laid beside her, checking for burn marks or something that would hurt her. "Stay here, okay? I'm going to try to get them, too." I told her. She nodded and her eyes started to close. I shook her and said "No, no. You can't fall asleep." She nodded again and this time she grabbed my hand. I could feel her trembeling on the cold frosty ground. But she still managed. "I Love You," She whispered. I kissed her hand and started towards the house again...

I Never Made It.
 

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