patonrice
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1 decade ago
I think you should slow down a little bit. I just read yyour first chapter and I loved it but it left in a cliffhanger and then I read this and I was like wat???? it just sorta skipped a lot. Slow down. Make it gradual build suspense. 0reply
patonrice · 1 decade ago
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I think you should slow down a little bit. I just read yyour first chapter and I loved it but it left in a cliffhanger and then I read this and I was like wat???? it just sorta skipped a lot. Slow down. Make it gradual build suspense.