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chapter 2 

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            Madison arrived home from school at 2:33PM. For the first time in awhile she walked into the front door when she normally went straight into her bedroom from the outside. She only did this because she saw her mother’s car parked in the driveway and she wanted to let her know she was home.
            “Hi mom,” Madison called to her mom when she stepped into the house.
            “Hi Maddy,” her mother called. Besides her friends, her mother was the only other person who ever called her Maddy, “I’m in the kitchen.” Madison walked to the kitchen, her bag still on her shoulder and purse on her arm, to greet her mother.
             “You’re home early.” Madison said to her mother. 
             “Yeah, I got a half day,” her mother explained while she cut a red pepper. “Sit,” her mom pointed to one of the bar stools that sat around the island, the opposite side her mother was standing on.
             “Okay,” Madison dropped her bags to the floor and sat down on one of the seats, “what’s up?”
             “Nothing,” her mom passed her a plate of  cut red peppers and Madison put one in her mouth and began to chew. “How have you been? I feel like we haven’t talked as much since the move.” Her mother admitted.
             “Well, you’re either working or spending all your fee time with Jack.” Madison answered when her mouth wasn’t full.
             “I think we need to change that. We need to talk more.” Her mother said. “Remember when we were still living back in California and we prepared dinners together.”
              “Yeah, I miss that.” Madison admitted, “and it’s not the only thing I miss.”
              “I know the move has been hard on you, but thanks for trying.”
              “But I’m not trying,” Madison told her mother, “I do my chores when I’m sure no one’s around and then I lock myself in the room for the rest of the night. I don’t even eat up here. I have everything down there, my room, bathroom, and even my own kitchen. I always come and exit through the door leading to my room and I drive my own car.” Madison quickly finished.
               “But you haven’t run away yet. Which means you still have hope that may be someday I’ll turn around and pick up and move.” Her mother smiled at her.
               She smiled back, “but even if we do move back it’s not like things will be the same. We won’t have the house that I grew up on and it’s been three years, I can’t guaruntee that I will have the same friends.”
               “That’s not entirely true. I rented out the house for the time being just incase things didn’t work. It still  is being rented out. And I’m sure you’re best friends will be jumping up and down when they hear you’re back.”
                Madison nearly choked when she heard her mom say this. “You … what!?” Madison said stunned, “why would keep renting out the house, it’s been three years.”
                “Just in case something happens.. And  it’s extra income coming in.” Her mother admitted.
              Madison smiled to herself. So maybe there still was a chance of moving back and getting out of this hellhole afterwards. She had finished her red peppers and had gotten up from her chair, “well I got to go do homework.” She put her plate in the sink and hugged her mother.
             “Okay have fun.” Her mother called when Madison was heading downstairs. Madison glanced back at her mother giving her a yeah, right look.  When she got down to her room, she climbed onto her bed and got her homework out. She was thrilled that there still might be a chance.
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