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So Close, Yet So Far Away
Chapter Six
I walked up to Angela's house as the winds of October nearly blew me away. I climbed the two steps which were in front of the door and rang the door bell. Her seven year old brother answered.
"Hey Jake. Is your sister home?" I asked the youngster.
"Yeah. I'll go get her." He said as he ran off to get Angela.
"Hey Mel!" Angela said as she signaled to let me in.
"Hey. Let's party." I said as I danced foolishly.
Angela looked at me and began to laugh.
"I've taught you so well!" She said as she pretended to wipe her tears of joy away.
"Now, come on. Let's go to my room." Angela said as she sprinted off.
Just as we were about to sit down, the door bell rang.
"Strange. I wasn't expecting anyone else." Angela said as she went to go check.
"Hey! What are you doing here?" Angela welcomed the person at the door.
"Just decided to chill out here. I'm so bored at home." A deep, manly voice spoke back.
"Who could that be?" I whisphered to myself.
I heard footsteps and quickly tried to look presentable by fixing my long, dark chocolate brown hair and adjusting my sweater.

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"Just go sit next to Melissa. I'll be there in a second." Angela said to the unexpected visitor.
"Melissa!"
It was Johnathan.
"Hey Johnathan." I said as I began to slightly blush.
"I didn't know you were here." Johnathan told me as if he were really excited to see me.
"How long are you staying?" He kindly asked.
"I don't know. I got here and I usually stay for hours, but it feels like a minute to Angela and I." I answered with a smile on my face.
Right when Johnathan was about to open his mouth to say something else, his phone rang. I didn't mean to look, but I saw a picture of some blonde and came to conclusion that it was Stacy, his girlfriend, calling.
"Hey baby." Johnathan softly said while on the phone with Stacy.
I looked down and almost felt the nerve to cry. How could I possibly be heart broken about Johnathan being with someone else if he was never mine to begin with? If he never even gave me a sign that he might actually be into me? If he probably never even saw me as more than just a friend?
"I'll just be outside." Johnathan whisphered to me.
I nodded.
"I'm back." Angela said. "Where's Johnathan?" She asked.
I pointed to where he was standing.
"He talking with his slutty girlfriend." I angerly said while laying on Angela's comfortable, purple bed.
Angela looked at me sorrowfully.
"Well..." Angela stopped herself from speaking because Johnathan had walked back in the room.
"Never mind." She said.
"Sorry. I had to take it." Johnathan said.
There was an awkward silence between the three of us for a couple of minutes.
"Hey!" Angela shouted to get our attention.
"Let's go watch a movie. A horror or something" She suggested.
"What about your brother?" Johnathan asked.
"He went to bed." Angela answered.
"What a nerd. Who sleeps at 5pm?" I jokingly said.
"I know.What a child!" Angela chuckled.

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