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Whatever It Ta kes
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Attention readers of Whatever It Takes!
Please leave comments with feedback about the story.
How was it?
What could I do/have done better with writing?
Do you want a sequel? (Sophomore year)
Did you like the ending?
Did you like the story overall?
Did you wish something could have been different?
I'm looking for constructive criticism & feedback
since this was my first story - please help me out! (:
Thanks!
9 faves · 11 comments · Jul 22, 2011 12:49pm
rasgirlx018
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1 decade ago
sequellll!
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jetadorex3
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1 decade ago
seequell
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annabananaaa11
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1 decade ago
SEQUE defintly(:
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xolivix16
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1 decade ago
love it!!! Do a sequel that would be so good!!!!:)
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i_was_enchanted_to_meet_you
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1 decade ago
a SEQUEL would be sick, and i think the story was done greaat :)
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aj_stories
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1 decade ago
deffff sequel ! (:
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jstories
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1 decade ago
SEQUELL!:D
The only thing was maybe a conversation between The couple but other that it was truly amazing!(: keep writing!
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beautifulliarxox
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1 decade ago
sequal!!!!!!!!!
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gopatandal
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1 decade ago
SEQUELLLLLLLLLL!
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BieberBaby_2181997
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1 decade ago
I Definetly Think You should do a sequel!:D Your Story Was Amazing, & Honestly their wasn't really anything wrong with your writing! It sounded good. So Keep Writing Girl, because for that Being Your First Story It Was Fantastic!(:
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xolivix16 · 1 decade ago
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sequel please!!!!!!=)