DreamBigLoveLong · 1 decade ago
O I WILL! haha
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koolmonkey5701 · 1 decade ago
I love it! you have to keep writing!
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DreamBigLoveLong · 1 decade ago
Thanks guys♥
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flipflop990 · 1 decade ago
hey hey hey! thannks for putting my story at the ennd(: and this chapter is greatt! I llove when it ends with a cliff hanger! keep writingg! ahh i wanna know the secret!
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Fancyfiction_collabx4 · 1 decade ago
keeep writing♥
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xoxocynthia · 1 decade ago
I like it! The only things are maybe take out the smilies and stretching of the words. That will make it sound more like a book:) like for the HAHAHA part you could maybe write something like "i laughed for what felt like hours" My favorite part was the cliff hanger at the end! Great work girl keep it up
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