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                                                   In Your Heart
                                          Chapter 50
Ashlee's POV:
We stepped out of Matt's car and i grabbed Jake's free hand, his other hand clutching his piggy bank. "Be careful crossing, this is a busy street," I warned, looking down at him. He nodded. "What kind of candy are you going to buy?" Matt asked Jake as we waited for the traffic to slow. "Im gunna buy sour patch kids, and skittles, and M&M's, and Reese peantbutter cups!" He said happily. I smiled. Jake was so lucky to be so young and not have a care in the word. The traffic slowed down and soon the street was deserted. I held Jake's hand tighter as we started to cross the road. "Uh oh," Jake said as his piggy bank slipped out of his hand and fell to the ground. There was a loud crack as the glass bank broke and shattered into a million pieces. I started to bend down to help Jake pick up his money but Matt stopped me. "Keep walking, i'll help him pick it up." He assured me. I nodded and gave a weak smile. I finished crossing the street and looked back towards Jake and Matt. I glanced down the street and saw a car speeding forward. "Matt!" I called out, trying to get his attention. I glanced down the road and watched the car speed forward at an alarming rate. "Matt!" I screamed again. He finally looked up at me and i pointed towards the speeding car. I watched horror fill Matt's face as he finally realized what was happening. Without warning, Matt jumped in front of Jakey just as the car reached them. My mouth dropped as i watched Jake and Matt fly through the air and hit the ground with a ear splitting crack. "Matt! Jakey!" I screamed. I ran over to their mangled, blood covered bodies and fell towards the ground. I looked at Matt's cold, lifeless body and grabbed his hand. "Matt, im so sorry." I choked out, tears streaming down my face. "Ashwee ," I heard Jake whimpered. I turned around and pulled him into my lap. "Jakey, im so, so sorry." I cried. "Don't be," He whispered, whipping away my tears. "No matter what happens, i'll always be in your heart." And just like that, my baby brother died in my arms.
THE END!
Comments? Feedback? I hope you guys liked it! I will be doing a sequel, any title ideas!?
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In Your Heart Chapter 50 Ashlee's POV: We stepped out of

34 faves · 15 comments · Apr 18, 2011 1:52pm

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Livv88 · 1 decade ago
I just read this whole this in 1hour! and i freaking gasped. Awww.!
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LovenSmilesx3 · 1 decade ago
awww :/
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KiwiBaby12 · 1 decade ago
OH MY HOLY CRAP!</3 i just like cried..
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storiesrmylife17 · 1 decade ago
omg that was such a surprise! i'm literally crying my eyes out!
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KayMay13 · 1 decade ago
I just spent 2 hours reading the whole thing <3 It was amazing besides the end it got very sad ! keep writing
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KatyJessMarie · 1 decade ago
I legit just cried. Its amazing.
Continue the next story please (:
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Danceituppp27 · 1 decade ago
aww thats so sad i literally cried :(
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lori_bunni · 1 decade ago
MATT CANT DIE DONTY MAKE HIM DIE PLEASE!
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katie69072 · 1 decade ago
i love your stories! and i think for your sequel ashley should go into like a depression about matt and jake. maybe have parker get jelous and mad at her for grieving over matt and make him think they were dating. but its your story and you are an amazing writer. love all of your stories :)
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creativeusername97 · 1 decade ago
ohhmygodd.... NOO WHY DID THEY DIE. im kinda depressed now.. i love your story but AWWW:'( you should right the sequel:D
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Storys4Life · 1 decade ago
Im soorry it was soo sad! & i might write more tonightt!
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writingismalife · 1 decade ago
OMG!! do the sequel soon!! that was like soooo sad :'(
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tessalovesyou97 · 1 decade ago
they BOTH died!? awwwwwwwww.
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MySecrets143 · 1 decade ago
That was SOOOOO sad! I cried! Moreeee!
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partychic_x · 1 decade ago
OMG moree plzz x
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