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A Gun, a lie, and a hypnotist


                "It's not worth it Sam. Please, put it down." I struggled to say as I looked down the barrel of the same gun that killed my fiancé. A warm tear slid down my face and I swallowed,
                "You lied to me!" She whispered in her Texas twang, "You promised you wouldn't tell! You promised you wouldn't hurt me! Look at what you did!" With every sentence her voice grew until, eventually, it became a shrill scream. "My life is ruined because of it!"
                "I didn't promise you anything! I didn't tell anyone about us either!" I shouted back, growing increasingly angry. "I keep my promises. It was you who distorted a meaningless relationship into something it wasn't! You're insane!"
                "I am not." She said calmly. She took a deep breath and her hand tightened on the gun. At the same time she closed her eyes and I closed mine. Then, she pulled the trigger.
                In my fiancé's case there wasn't a reason or a suspect and, to the police, it looked as if they didn't need a suspect, they had ruled it a suicide. I knew better though. Two weeks ago my fiancé was killed. Three weeks ago I had cheated on her. Four weeks ago, I met Sam.



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Stella242 · 1 decade ago
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blueberrybabe121 · 1 decade ago
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