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Remembering you

chapter four.

Aaron
Age 16
          It was the first time I had spent Christmas away from home. My parents and I held up our glasses and toasted over our dinner in Jamaica. Now, I was glad we were here because I heard from Drew that there was supposed to be a big snow storm coming tomorrow. I hated snow.
            It was different not being in the apartment in Brooklyn. We would be sitting in the living room, opening the presents, ya know, crap like that. I wasn’t exactly happy that we were away from home, especially since it was just my parents and me. It was so boring, and there weren’t really any other guys or girls to hang with that I liked. We finished dinner and I stayed outside, walking around, trying to find somewhere for me to think.
            Championships for swimming were coming up and I couldn’t afford a week off. They were in February but I didn’t want to be all bent out of shape and train extra hard in January. And this food here wasn’t helping. I decided I would do some laps in the pool or in the ocean tomorrow morning. The wind blew effortlessly over me and I smiled and looked back at the lights from the hotel.
            It wasn’t a very big property but I went far enough for me to only hear the music hum in the back round. The ocean was my music, now. I walked down onto the beach and sat down, letting the water lap at my feet. It was December and the water still managed to feel like bath water. I smiled and looked at the sky.
            I didn’t get why no one came down here at night. It was a lot nicer and prettier, than in the morning. I took out my dad’s expensive Cannon and took a picture of the shadows of the tiki lights lining the pathway. I made my eyes squint and pressed the button. I looked down to see how it turned out. There was a girl in the picture. What the hell?
            I looked up and saw the same figure standing there. It was definitely a girl, unless it was a boy with long hair and shorts and with one of those off the shoulder shirts. She walked down and said rather boldly, “It’s kind of creepy when people take pictures of you at night.”
            Her tone was sarcastic and slightly flirty at the same time.
“I was not trying to take a picture of you. You were in my picture. I was trying to get the shadow of the tiki lights,” I defended myself. “I’m not some creepy old guy hiding behind a bush. I’m sixteen.”
She was standing over me, and even in the dark I could tell I would’ve liked her. “How’d the picture turn out?” she asked as she settled down next to me. She smelt like fruits and vanilla and her soft hair brushed against my skin before she held it back from the wind. She smelled and sounded irresistible. Her voice was light, not whiny. I pulled myself together and showed her the picture.
“It’s not so bad,” she said after a minute.
            I looked at it again and it looked like those pictures of silhouettes. It looked really good actually. “I’ve always liked photography,” she continued.
            I tried hard not to lose myself in her voice and smell. “Really,” I asked, trying hard not to sound corny. She laughed and got up, “Really. Sorry for ruining your picture.”
            She brushed off some sand and walked back up the pathway and disappeared around the bend.
 


**okay so there are 2 main point of views: Aaron and Skylar. the other two point of views are from the same people but they are from 8 years ago. is it too confusing? sorry, if it is.

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