His Brown Eyes Chapter 1
we were in andys room playing black ops. "no! no! no! i cant
believe you beat me!"andy said. "i guess im just too
good for you!" i said "yea funny" Hi im
kaylee. im a junior in highskool and i have a bf named joey. i
have two besties...ella and andy. ive known ella since 4th grade
and she has a little crush on andy. ive been best friends with
andy since we were born. he has a gf too...sarah. i hate
her...cuz iv been in love with andy for 4 years. i just dont
wanna ruin our friendship...or me and ellas.
"you want something to eat?"andy said.
"sure" "i got popcorn...and thats it...so what do
you want??" "ohhh hard desicion!" ''shut
up''he said punching me in the arm. he made poporn and we
watched a movie. i love our riday nightpartys.
the whole house smelled like his colgne. yum. in the middle
of the movie andy got a text from sarah telling him to go ovr to
her house. ugh. i hate sarah! andy looked at me with
that adorable puppy face. "go" i said standing up.
i hate myself for giving in! "aw thank you oo much
kaylee! i owe you big time for cuting our night short!" andy
said jumping up and hugging me. i love myself for giving
in! "yea its ok" "ill drive you
home""kayy thanks" we got in andys car and
taylor swifts song you belong with me cam on. of course. on the
way home he complained about how he lost to me on black ops.
we got to my house which was 2 blocks away and i got out of
the car. "hey im realy sorry for cutting our night
short" "its fine...i mean u do love sarah
right??"weeelllll...im not sure...right now i just like
her" "okk byee!" "see ya!" and wih that
he drove out of my driveway out down the street blasting
t-pain. man hes really happy. i bet he does love her and
not me. I walked into my house and went to bed.
Suggestions.comments.faves. ill take them
new story...do you like it??
should i continue?
sorry its boring. itll get better i promise.
3 faves · 2 comments · Jan 15, 2011 10:04am
eknovels
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1 decade ago
I don't mean to accuse you or anything... but I kinda just wrote a story called his BLUE eyes ... idk it might just be a coincidence ...
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MusicLoveFreak13 · 1 decade ago
I think its a good story but I think you should edit before you post. And everytime a character talks your supposed to start a new line. Im not judging just giving advice.
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