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His Brown Eyes Chapter 1
we were in andys room playing black ops. "no! no! no! i cant believe you beat me!"andy said. "i guess im just too good for you!" i said "yea funny" Hi im kaylee. im a junior in highskool and i have a bf named joey. i have two besties...ella and andy. ive known ella since 4th grade and she has a little crush on andy. ive been best friends with andy since we were born. he has a gf too...sarah. i hate her...cuz iv been in love with andy for 4 years. i just dont wanna ruin our friendship...or me and ellas.

"you want something to eat?"andy said. "sure" "i got popcorn...and thats it...so what do you want??" "ohhh hard desicion!" ''shut up''he said punching me in the arm. he made poporn and we watched a movie. i love our riday nightpartys. the whole house smelled like his colgne. yum. in the middle of the movie andy got a text from sarah telling him to go ovr to her house. ugh. i hate sarah! andy looked at me with that adorable puppy face. "go" i said standing up. i hate myself for giving in! "aw thank you oo much kaylee! i owe you big time for cuting our night short!" andy said jumping up and hugging me. i love myself for giving in! "yea its ok" "ill drive you home""kayy thanks" we got in andys car and taylor swifts song you belong with me cam on. of course. on the way home he complained about how he lost to me on black ops.  we got to my house which was 2 blocks away and i got out of the car. "hey im realy sorry for cutting our night short" "its fine...i mean u do love sarah right??"weeelllll...im not sure...right now i just like her" "okk byee!" "see ya!" and wih that he drove out of my driveway out down the street blasting t-pain. man hes really happy. i bet he does love her and not me. I walked into my house and went to bed.

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His Brown Eyes Chapter 1 we were in andys room playing black

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MusicLoveFreak13 · 1 decade ago
I think its a good story but I think you should edit before you post. And everytime a character talks your supposed to start a new line. Im not judging just giving advice.
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eknovels · 1 decade ago
I don't mean to accuse you or anything... but I kinda just wrote a story called his BLUE eyes ... idk it might just be a coincidence ...
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