this is  the first chapter of  a story i wrote before , what do you think.

Life Upside Down

   Chapter 1 

                   Hi my name is Emma , I’m 15 years old . I have blonde  wavy hair I have blue eyes .  I live with my foster parents Jane and Nick  in  California  ,and yes I guess I can be classified as a nerd, type of girl, like I get very high grades, sometimes I love to read . But  I have a crush on this guy named Nathan. We live in a huge house , in  the center of town. Our house is almost the biggest, one that you can see.  I don’t really have that many friends… because I just got adopted by my new “ parents ”  , so I just moved to this state .  I have  two new brothers  : john , and drew  they are both 10 , also I have  a new sister ; Abby she is 5 .  Well that is about my life .

I woke up from my blue fuzzy alarm clock , it matches everything in my room, everything in the room is either white or a light blue color. I got up and took a quick shower , then put on my  skinny jeans  and a  blue  shirt  on it , it says aeropostole in white lettering .  I put on my black flats , and brushed my teeth , then I  grabbed my phone and headed downstairs . I grabbed a poptart  and  walked to school .
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As soon as I got to the school , everyone looked at me . A lot of people was commenting about my  hair ,  and my eyes , and my outfit. I just said thank you and smiled ,  I went to gym class.  The only pair of gym shorts were kind of a little bit to short, every guy was looking at me  like I was some piece of meat or something.  By the end of the day , I  made a  few friends :  Kate she is 15, and Taylor he is 16 . We exchanged  numbers and everything , we are in mostly every class together. 

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comment tell me if i should keep writing this one or the other "untitled " one . So which one ? 

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