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Jenny was so happy about the house
they had found. For once in her life it
was on the right side of town. She
unpacked her things with such great
ease. As she watched her new curtains
blow in the breeze. How wonderful it
was to have her own room. School
would be starting; she'd have friends
over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and
parties; she was so happy It's just the way
she wanted her life to be. On the first day
of school, everything went great. She made
new friends and even got a date! She thought
, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be,
Because I just got a date with the star of the team!"

To be known in this school you had to have a clout,
And dating this guy would sure help her out. There
was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents
had said she was too young to date.
    

 
 

"Well, I just won't tell them the entire truth.
They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?"
Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night.
Her parents frowned but said, "All right."


Excited, she got ready for the big event
But as she rushed around like she had no sense,
She began to feel guilty about all the lies,
But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?

Well the pizza was good, and the party was great,
But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Jeff
was half drunk by this time. She felt someone remove
her from the twisted rubble, And heard, call an ambulance!
These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best.
But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck.
Then wondered to herself if Jeff was all right,
And if the people in the other car was alive.
She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad.

"You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad."
These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently
told her that Jeff was dead. They said "Jenny, we've
done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too."
"But the people in the other car!? "Jenny cried.
"We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed,
"God, forgive me for what I've done
I only wanted to have just one night of fun."
"Tell those people's family, I've made their lives
dim, And wish I could return their families to them."
"Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied,  And that it's my
fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please
tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never
agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes.
And a few moments later Jenny died.

A man asked the nurse,
"Why didn't you do your best?"
To bid that girl her one last request?"

She looked at the man with eyes so sad.
"Because the people in the other car

were her mom and dad."



im sure this is on here already so sorry .but its a great story and its sad and it just goes to show you what people go through to be popular
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pizza, party, and a moonlight ride... whats the worse that can

21 faves · 1 comments · Nov 30, 2009 9:00pm

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soccaXXlove02 · 1 decade ago
omg this is so sad!!!
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