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we all have that one night

where your done putting up a fight
your crying your eyes out
we went so wrong, no doubt
i used to love you
i probably still do
ill never forget our first kiss
oh how i miss
you were always there for me
now were breaking free </3

can you tell me if this is any good?
i wrote it and i just wanna know the truth:)
thanks. it would help lots since i write music
and everything so i will know what to change
to make it better (: THANKS !

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we all have that one night where your done putting up a fight

1 faves · 2 comments · Aug 22, 2009 8:01pm

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dayummmxzahra

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BadAssAlice · 1 decade ago
It s great! I love it!

~Alice
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another_lost_soul · 1 decade ago
its pretty good only some parts are totally random and by the end your talking about a totally different thing, if that makes any sense at all. but overall i really like it
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we all have that one night where your done putting up a fight

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