monkey314
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1 decade ago
I love this story!!! keep writing because it's great! reply
wriiteoutloud_x
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1 decade ago
I'm writing more later on day. Thanks for the feedback ! ♥ reply
kaitesten
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1 decade ago
Write more tonight!! reply
wriiteoutloud_x
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1 decade ago
Ok. I'm writing now! :) reply
xolacrosse25
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1 decade ago
writee more please(: reply
_luster
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1 decade ago
your a good writer, i can tell. but the story, it just sounds, to rushed and you pay to much attention to how she looks, and blah. i really hate sounding mean, but it's just this story, is too teen - ish. even though i am a teen too. I couldnt read this as a book. but i cans ee you definitly going to be an amazing author, and i congrat you on your many faves and wish for you to succeed. reply
wriiteoutloud_x
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1 decade ago
i'll write more later! [= reply
ohxhelloxthere
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1 decade ago
moree=))....plleaSse reply
laughitupp
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1 decade ago
I lovveee thiis story please hurryyy and put up the nextt oneee!!(: reply
wriiteoutloud_x
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1 decade ago
tomorrow im writing more, thanks for the support! (: reply
PakiGirl
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1 decade ago
So this is the first storyy iv read on here and its f*cking amazing dude :P i only started reading from here but carry on,Cant wait for more! x reply
love_is_forever
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1 decade ago
love love love this! write more please!(: reply
wriiteoutloud_x
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1 decade ago
ahhh, i gotta go. tomorrow! i promise! reply
archuleta28
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1 decade ago
i love it. write more, NOW:) reply
wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
ok! :D
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monkey314 · 1 decade ago
I love this story!!! keep writing because it's great!
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
I'm writing more later on day. Thanks for the feedback ! ♥
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kaitesten · 1 decade ago
Write more tonight!!
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
Ok. I'm writing now! :)
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xolacrosse25 · 1 decade ago
writee more please(:
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_luster · 1 decade ago
your a good writer, i can tell. but the story, it just sounds, to rushed and you pay to much attention to how she looks, and blah. i really hate sounding mean, but it's just this story, is too teen - ish. even though i am a teen too. I couldnt read this as a book. but i cans ee you definitly going to be an amazing author, and i congrat you on your many faves and wish for you to succeed.
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
i'll write more later! [=
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ohxhelloxthere · 1 decade ago
moree=))....plleaSse
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laughitupp · 1 decade ago
I lovveee thiis story please hurryyy and put up the nextt oneee!!(:
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
♥
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KSay · 1 decade ago
I would kick him in da nuts too. :)
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ohxhelloxthere · 1 decade ago
aahhh, mmoore !
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
tomorrow im writing more, thanks for the support! (:
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PakiGirl · 1 decade ago
So this is the first storyy iv read on here and its f*cking amazing dude :P i only started reading from here but carry on,Cant wait for more! x
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love_is_forever · 1 decade ago
love love love this! write more please!(:
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
ahhh, i gotta go. tomorrow! i promise!
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archuleta28 · 1 decade ago
i love it. write more, NOW:)
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
chapter 4 *
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
chapter 3 *
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