beccalove13
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1 decade ago
im liking the rise against(; reply
RockrChik1121
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1 decade ago
Its so good love it! reply
shady
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1 decade ago
hey, your chapter is good, in know its a chick story but as a guy i think its pretty good, you have good dialogue, and you dont over detail your characters surroundings. good job :) reply
theoneandonlyme11 · 1 decade ago
sorry this one isn't as fancy but i didn't want to do three parts to this one chapter:P
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xxaexx6 · 1 decade ago
Omg that's scary
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theoneandonlyme11 · 1 decade ago
14 and no i don't know what your talking about? Is that a good or bad thing
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dermakat · 1 decade ago
How old are you?
You write like Stephenie Meyer.
If you know what I mean...
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beccalove13 · 1 decade ago
awesome. :D
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beccalove13 · 1 decade ago
im liking the rise against(;
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RockrChik1121 · 1 decade ago
Its so good love it!
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shady · 1 decade ago
hey, your chapter is good, in know its a chick story but as a guy i think its pretty good, you have good dialogue, and you dont over detail your characters surroundings. good job :)
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