MissGorgeous
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1 decade ago
Wow, that is amazing, you are a really good writer, There is one thing I really dont like about it though, its that its not a book and I dont have it :) I would love to read more :) Its keeps you really occupied and you dont want to stop reading, WELL DONE :) reply
LoveJess
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1 decade ago
heey its prettty good :D reply
PeachCrab7
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1 decade ago
This is a really good beginning to a story because it introduces some of the problem along with the characters and setting. Please write more :)
I want to know what happens to there realationship and if it gets better or worse! What is this story called? reply
storywritter98
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1 decade ago
ummm...thanks i guess :) reply
storywritter98
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1 decade ago
Oh...my i will try to think of something. sorta like that ....well Thank You very much !! I will try to post it as soon as possible. reply
neverforgetme13
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1 decade ago
write more but add a twist like hes different from everyone else and hes not normal like he only wants to be with her and she like someone he knew before like vampire diarys you can do some thing like that reply
movielover11
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1 decade ago
that was a good story reply
neverforgetme13
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1 decade ago
i think you should keep writing i like it and i want to know what happens next please continue reply
MissGorgeous · 1 decade ago
Whyd you stop it was good?
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sportslife29 · 1 decade ago
*spelling
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MissGorgeous · 1 decade ago
Wow, that is amazing, you are a really good writer, There is one thing I really dont like about it though, its that its not a book and I dont have it :) I would love to read more :) Its keeps you really occupied and you dont want to stop reading, WELL DONE :)
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LoveJess · 1 decade ago
heey its prettty good :D
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PeachCrab7 · 1 decade ago
This is a really good beginning to a story because it introduces some of the problem along with the characters and setting. Please write more :)
I want to know what happens to there realationship and if it gets better or worse! What is this story called?
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whenforeverends · 1 decade ago
I like it :)
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storywritter98 · 1 decade ago
umm ok sorry i just have been busy so.. i dont know if i will contuie .
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laughitupp · 1 decade ago
gooood.(:
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storywritter98 · 1 decade ago
ummm...thanks i guess :)
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storywritter98 · 1 decade ago
Oh...my i will try to think of something. sorta like that ....well Thank You very much !! I will try to post it as soon as possible.
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neverforgetme13 · 1 decade ago
write more but add a twist like hes different from everyone else and hes not normal like he only wants to be with her and she like someone he knew before like vampire diarys you can do some thing like that
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movielover11 · 1 decade ago
that was a good story
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neverforgetme13 · 1 decade ago
i think you should keep writing i like it and i want to know what happens next please continue
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